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Too Much

I'm that guy that checks on you after 8 hours of work I'm that guy who watches your messes then cleans up the dirt I'm that guy that will help you, yeah, you're coming first But am I doing too much? I'm that man who understands you when the world ignores I'm that man that knows for sure, when it rains it pours I'm that man who reaches to open every closed door But am I doing too much? You're that girl that see's me as her least important You're that girl who puts me below a hair appointment You're that girl who says my choices were inadvertent I'm sure I am doing too much.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/10/2017 4:24:00 PM
Very well said, Xavier!
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Date: 5/10/2017 11:00:00 AM
I know how that feels like
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Date: 5/10/2017 10:57:00 AM
Nice work bro! We've all been there, you expressed it perfectly. Anger, fear, disappointment with yourself, it's all there. Strong, strong work! Even though it might hurt writing, You should be proud of that one. I'm a fan.
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Date: 5/10/2017 9:56:00 AM
Too often are we taken for granted by those we hold dear. Well done
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Date: 5/10/2017 8:06:00 AM
Nailed it!
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Date: 5/10/2017 5:45:00 AM
Been there Xavier.
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Date: 5/8/2017 8:20:00 AM
Congrats on your placement on home page..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2016 6:34:00 AM
Good work Johnson keep that great work up just for your own please
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Xavier Johnson
Date: 11/11/2016 6:13:00 AM
Thank you for reading up on my poetry! I'll soon have more to publish for the month and I hope you enjoy the content.
Date: 9/3/2016 8:36:00 PM
Interesting list.........skat
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Xavier Johnson
Date: 9/4/2016 8:34:00 PM
Thank you!

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