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Too Many Birds

Swans and geese are in the parlor, a toucan is in the hall. An ostrich just ran past the kitchen, he is at least six feet tall A flamingo strut her feathers against the conservatory wall The peacock is eating your breakfast dear. I’m going to the mall.

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Date: 1/23/2023 6:29:00 PM
What I see when I read this poem was fantastic. I just posted an acrostic poem called FEATHERS. It makes me think of this one a little. What do peacocks eat for breakfast? We are a big bird family. I can't wait to share this one w/ my husband. I bought him a bird feeder for Christmas. You are so darn funny.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2023 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Marikate. The kids at school keep saying this; I do not see it myself, but my mother was hilarious!

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