Too Many

one too many times 
one too many times
you have stepped on my feet 
stabbed me in the back 
and made me out to be the fool that i am not
two too many times 
two too many times
you have made me cry 
made my head hurt with thoughts of your lies
now i feel like the idiot that i wasn't born to be
three too many times
three too many times
you have made my soul wished that i had never met you
now all i have is bad thoughts outweighing the good
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 11, 2009 at 8:53 PM
You may wish to change the form from I do not know to free verse.lol
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July 11, 2009 at 8:51 PM
My heart goes out to you Gladys! It's one of the worst things in the world when those you see as angels of love turned out to be heart breakers. It's not natural, be careful with who you fall in love with next... and please take heart. You are such a great poet, please keep writing...sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writings. Great you Gladys ! Adeleke
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