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Too Little Too Late HLM

mom, without malice, cast upon chastity spell, overprotecting Timid Tracy never had a date, Humbly yet she accepted her fate Mom, so wise and adept, Refuses to accept Her dear daughter's virginity state thoughtful advice from the wise often takes young in the right direction but at the wrong time January 20, 2022

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Date: 3/16/2022 8:05:00 PM
Margarita, sorry it took so long to comment on this fun write. GREAT job combining thes forms. My Belated Congrats on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 3/14/2022 3:50:00 AM
I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/14/2022 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. M.
Date: 3/11/2022 7:58:00 AM
So true, chastity spell, luckily not the belt! great write Margarita and congratulations!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/14/2022 7:58:00 AM
Thank you and congrats to you! M.
Date: 3/11/2022 5:07:00 AM
Right direction at the wrong time. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/14/2022 7:58:00 AM
Thank you! M.
Date: 1/19/2022 10:23:00 AM
Until the 1929 Marriage Act, the minimum age was 14 for boys, and 12 for girls, so "time is of the essence!"? Aloha!
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Date: 1/19/2022 10:41:00 AM
Darn, without that act I had my girls at 30, 37 and 40...:) Aloha!