Notes About The Poem

too little too late

the pulse of humanity
shudders in throbbing pain
meanwhile muffled cries of hopelessness
await redemption as tears of time
may possibly wash away
man's devastation


AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Lane Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 6:54 AM
What an ominously disparaging artwork, Line. Your verse is well-matched to its darkness.
Lane Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 9:15 AM
That doesn’t make it any the less a good one.
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 8:39 AM
thanks, Lin ~ not the most cheerful poem ~ lol
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