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the pulse of humanity
shudders in throbbing pain
meanwhile muffled cries of hopelessness
await redemption as tears of time
may possibly wash away
man's devastation


AP: 3rd place 2025

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/14/2025 6:54:00 AM
What an ominously disparaging artwork, Line. Your verse is well-matched to its darkness.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/14/2025 9:15:00 AM
That doesn’t make it any the less a good one.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2025 8:39:00 AM
thanks, Lin ~ not the most cheerful poem ~ lol

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