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Too Late For Supermoon

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Too late I learned the Supermoon had been around. Another chance I missed to see some magic in the air! To see it red, I ran fast to my yard and found A plain full moon that looked down at me in my underwear! Written 10/1/2015 For Supermoon Eclipse Contest

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Julia Ward

Date: 10/13/2015 4:28:00 AM

Hahaha! That last line was not expected! Well done for the win, Andrea. Julia, xx

Skat A

Date: 10/9/2015 12:25:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2015 3:30:00 PM

Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:32:00 AM

Brilliant take Andrea! Loved the humour, congrats on big win!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/7/2015 8:03:00 PM

Simple with an element of humour! Congrats Andrea on your sweet win! Love

Judy Konos

Date: 10/7/2015 5:33:00 PM

Congratulations.......on your big win

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2015 2:24:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2015 2:21:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations -loved the humour here Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/7/2015 1:30:00 PM

What fun that must have been for the neighbors, too. lol Congrats on the win.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/5/2015 4:46:00 PM

G'day Andrea... and so the moon was not blushing as it spotted you in skimpy dress - ha-ha - Lindsay

Daver Austin

Date: 10/5/2015 11:30:00 AM

Oh lucky moon. Remember when the moon is red all the pumpkins come to life. Love, daver

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/4/2015 10:07:00 PM

But -- did you turn to drop and moon it back? Thats the million dollar question. lol Great and humorous poem my friend. I once raced out our front door chasing our poodle that ran outside. As luck would have it, the lady next door saw me wearing nothing but my white underwear and white socks. My wife thought it quite funny. Great poem.. A7

Jennifer Walker

Date: 10/4/2015 5:44:00 PM

Oh, my, you make me laugh. To take an experience and turn it into a great poem.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/4/2015 3:15:00 PM

Oh gee supermoon was replaced by peeping moon in no time so it seens, Love it he he he : )

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/4/2015 10:51:00 AM

Waited the whole week then found nothing but cloud cover..didn't need to go out in my underwear to see clouds..to bad too, they were clean underwear.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/4/2015 9:49:00 AM

This is an awesome quatrain tribute to the supermoon my dear friend, Andrea. I'm glad i've read it this evening. It makes me smile:) Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest! Thank you so much as well for your birthday greetings and wishes. It was not late my dear friend. It was in fact an early greetings :))). Thank you so much and have a nice weekend! love lots and hugs, Leonora

Jan Allison

Date: 10/4/2015 9:34:00 AM

Like the humourous take on the theme Andrea - i hope you didn't do a moon to show your disappointment lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/4/2015 1:54:00 PM

DANG, I should have put something like that into the poem. Mooning the moon! but anyway, this is a true story. I ran back inside before anyone might happen to see me (as if anyone would be walking on the canal that late at night. haha)

Miraj Raha

Date: 10/4/2015 9:14:00 AM

I agree with Ian,may get some extra points for the humorous tone.nice write Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/4/2015 1:54:00 PM

sure hope so, Miraj.

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/4/2015 9:06:00 AM

:-))) Hmmn...Andie in her undies... worth picture for the full moon to come out, indeed! Way to go, lady! hugs!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/4/2015 1:54:00 PM

Sports bra too. heehee

Julie Heckman

Date: 10/4/2015 8:00:00 AM

Funny... I like this one...

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/4/2015 6:25:00 AM

Love it! I imagine the moon sees much but has no one to tell it too because everything else is sleeping.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2015 4:48:00 AM

- Magical or not ...... moon has seen much behind lace curtains :)) - Love it, Andrea! - I wish you good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/4/2015 3:24:00 AM

Oh!!! I loved this one. At least the moon got to see a show. You are so good at writing, woman. I'm constantly amazed. Waiting for your next contest...Get a move on it.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/4/2015 1:54:00 PM

thanks, sweetie

Michael Tor

Date: 10/4/2015 1:11:00 AM

Lol Andrea Nice thoughts. Enjoyed reading. Nice entry!