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Too Late For Honeycombs and Spring

He calls back the lost bee to climb between last falling blossoms of his attracting lips To sip , to feed on nectar To feel his pollen on her skin But it is too late for honeycombs and the enamouring blush of their Spring
8 line max. Contest old or new for Rick Praise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/12/2015 7:07:00 PM
Masterful piece--pure poetry
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Date: 10/12/2015 5:06:00 PM
brill write.liked much
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Date: 10/11/2015 4:52:00 PM
What a delightful Etheree, Charm! I love it! I call this poetry:) #7 // paul
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Date: 10/11/2015 3:25:00 PM
Charmaine, this is such a beautiful and romantic piece. Great job!:-) Alexis 7
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Date: 10/11/2015 8:33:00 AM
naughtiness with class....I hope you know you passed....your words seduce the mind....I am so glad I gave them my time....;)
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Date: 10/10/2015 1:57:00 PM
Ethereal Etheree, dear Charmaine! A seven!
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Date: 10/10/2015 10:17:00 AM
Beautiful Charmaine, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 10/6/2015 8:07:00 AM
Have never written in that form but your fine poem speaks beauty to me! A7
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Date: 10/6/2015 7:22:00 AM
Great change of focus. Wonderful write.
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Date: 10/5/2015 6:23:00 PM
oh, Charma you are a delight with these!!
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Date: 10/5/2015 7:55:00 AM
This is one of the best etherees I have read Charmaine. Simply stunning.
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Date: 10/3/2015 4:16:00 PM
beautiful etheree Charma:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/3/2015 4:14:00 PM
Very nice Charma. Be careful not to get stung : )
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2015 4:25:00 PM
Bee good and don't sting...lol
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/3/2015 4:15:00 PM
the lone bee cant get stung : ).. But She can sting : ). Tnks for reading

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