Too Late For Honeycombs and Spring

He calls back the lost bee to climb between last falling blossoms of his attracting lips To sip , to feed on nectar To feel his pollen on her skin But it is too late for honeycombs and the enamouring blush of their Spring
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Curtis Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Masterful piece--pure poetry
Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 5:06 PM
brill write.liked much
Callus Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 4:52 PM
What a delightful Etheree, Charm! I love it! I call this poetry:) #7 // paul
Y. Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Charmaine, this is such a beautiful and romantic piece. Great job!:-) Alexis 7
Boddie Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 8:33 AM
naughtiness with class....I hope you know you passed....your words seduce the mind....I am so glad I gave them my time....;)
Trifiatis Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 1:57 PM
Ethereal Etheree, dear Charmaine! A seven!
Muzzey Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Beautiful Charmaine, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Lindley Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Have never written in that form but your fine poem speaks beauty to me! A7
Thirtyseven Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Great change of focus. Wonderful write.
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 6:23 PM
oh, Charma you are a delight with these!!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 7:55 AM
This is one of the best etherees I have read Charmaine. Simply stunning.
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 4:16 PM
beautiful etheree Charma:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 4:14 PM
Very nice Charma. Be careful not to get stung : )
Smith Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 4:25 PM
Bee good and don't sting...lol
Chircop Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 4:15 PM
the lone bee cant get stung : ).. But She can sting : ). Tnks for reading
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