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Too Far Gone

I'm a long forgotten soul,
The world has become so cold.
Life is hanging by a thread,
Everyone seems so dead.

Where do I stand in this life?
In my hand, I wield a knife.
It's funny when no cares, 
I'll just fall right down these stairs.

No one even knows, 
There was not even a crow.
Do not tell me it is a lie,
I have already said goodbye.

No it is not a con,
I am already too far gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 4/13/2016 8:00:00 PM
Hi Dana, Amazing write.Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/13/2016 1:56:00 PM
Hi, Dana,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/13/2016 11:30:00 AM
Dana, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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