Too Far From Perfect

Seeing the spring flowers
with colors so intense and alive,
makes me praise their Creator even more;
amazed and breathless,
unable to find any imperfection
in all that lies under the infinite sky!
By the winding path, under a fluttering willow tree,
I sit down and begin my contemplation...
by admiring a beauty never seen,
hidden from me, who is too far from perfect! 

If roses are prettier than teasels,
they, too, are plants that serve a true purpose;
and if the witch-hazels have only yellow flowers,
are they less valuable or useful than
the dandelions with notched leaves?
Wouldn't the jacarandas provide them shade
in those steaming afternoons, or shelter them when
an unexpected storm arrives?
Nothing is imperfect and useless,
if it was created by His divine hand;
the quatrefoils are as much admirable as
the sleek nodes found elsewhere!

Climbing the rough cliffs of mountains,
brings me a step closer to serenity...
where pine groves culminate in mystery,
as the purest spring refreshes me:
whenever the scorching sun dehydrates my rough  lips;
and from an elevation that opens up to an entire valley,
I'm the smallest being with a probable fragility,
and being too far from perfect:
I become aware of every defect...
to realize that nobody has an invincible aspect!   

If everything that's inexplicable and beautiful
excites me...to make me immensely grateful;
why wouldn't I be astonished and be elevated by sublime joy
anytime I witness the splendor of each sunrise:
when the eagles and seagulls flap their wings a thousands times...
to savor a freedom that allows them to emit a joyful cry? 
And being so mortal and too far from perfect...
it doesn't mean I must live within a limit!   

Copyright 2008 by Andrew Crisci

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 2/10/2011 9:09:00 AM
Big congrats to you dear friend on your wonderful piece being featured this week. Please keep carving creative castles with your passionate pen! Wishing you many more features & all the best with your writing endeavour. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 2/9/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2011 4:06:00 PM
Congrats on an uplifting narrative being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:49:00 AM
So filled with joy, and hope and beauty! What a wonderful poem to find on the featured page!!! Wonderful, Andrew! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/6/2011 6:17:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a really great one to share with us all with luv my friend...
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