Too Close To The Edge

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Poetic Form: Quatrain
Inspired: 2024 June 04
Image: Achieve Success by HuffPost

While my head slumps low, on both crouching knees, my meek soul doesn't know, rhyme nor reason seize, on both crouching knees, while my head slumps low, rhyme nor reason seize, my meek soul doesn't know. There'd be a stake-knife, that choice heightened soul, dreams larger-than-life completes source cores whole, that choice heightened soul, there'd be a stake-knife, completes source cores whole, dreams larger-than-life. Disclosures concede strength raised benchmarks high, stay the course, succeed, proud guides, worth third-eye, strength raised benchmarks high, disclosures concede, proud guides, worth third-eye, stay the course, succeed. No man's land--command, rare form sights take charge, performed cash-in-hand, zoomed measures discharge, rare form sights take charge, no man's land--command, zoomed measures discharge, performed cash-in-hand.

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