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Too Clever For Whatever

And so came a time, when humanity
finally understood the meaning of life 

Why we are here

How creation started

When it will come to an end 

What happens when we die 

Who is the one true God

Whoa!! Who is the one true God

Who is it, tell me 

Is it not evident, reading the above 

By
David Kavanagh

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Gershon Wolf Date: 12/14/2021 8:03:00 PM Tell your Muse that she can stop laughing already, David. I'll be back in a few farts past a freckle. Gotta go check my belly button lint trap. :) gw Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/15/2021 2:02:00 AM Yuk that’s scary Gershon, but us human Gods can even get rid of navel’s now, it’s all the fashion, cheers David

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/8/2021 12:16:00 PM Hi David questions asked with no common answer - Hamlet questioned death, he questioned that if he did die, who would come back to admit or deny. I so enjoy your philosophies of life. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/8/2021 2:09:00 PM I’m delighted you enjoyed this one Jennifer, not many on this site would or could, I have this inkling or tendency that sooner or later if we don’t go extinct for whatever reason, our intelligence with the help of our computers might just crack the reasons for everything, and to know the mind of a God, must equate to being a God, cheers David

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/3/2021 12:30:00 PM Theories abound I'm not convinced mankind has grasped everything yet, I remember a long time back they thought the earth was supported by elephants and these were the scholars of the day lol. Tom Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/3/2021 12:41:00 PM Leave it to you Tom lol, but you are correct, all these theories are still just that, theories, we certainly haven’t grasped everything but we edge a little closer every day, in theory anyway, we won’t discount the elephant’s yet, cheers David

Sotto Poet Date: 12/3/2021 11:51:00 AM David, this is a fantastic poem. If human intelligence had discovered all of this, your poem would have been a future extrapolation with a bit of human nature plagiarism, in addition to the volcanic outgassing that generated the primordial atmosphere and, later, the ocean, and the plasma cosmology, the alpha or omega. Blessings Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/3/2021 12:36:00 PM A future extrapolation Lasaad, is indeed my intention here, plus a little parody on our human prowess, surely to know the mind of God, would to be God, Some already think they understand everything, but the picture is far from finished in my mind anyway, thank you for the kind remarks, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty Date: 12/3/2021 10:24:00 AM Title says it all David Too Clever Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/3/2021 2:56:00 PM By the way I believe Mr Cox, is still missing a large part of the puzzle, but at least he’s trying damn hard David Kavanagh Date: 12/3/2021 11:06:00 AM I was watching the new Brian Cox universe documentary, and he basically explained the Big Bang and how it came about, emanating from a different type of universe, all based on what science knows so far, imagine the human mind figured all this out, my poem is a future extension of this with a little parody on humanity, cheers David