Tonight {tanka}

Crystal clear tonight
The stars above shine so bright
Frost has its own bite
The moon offers its delight
Sometimes life just feels so right
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Foulk Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 10:32 AM
a great piece you wrote, i like the hakus you do. they are a joy to read.
Winter Avatar
July 19, 2008 at 6:07 AM
What I wouldn't give for a little frost right now. Simply beautiful and refreshing to read. Love, Shar
Austin Avatar
July 19, 2008 at 4:46 AM
Great stuff, Michael. I love the tanka form, and I love to rhyme it. This little gem is perfect. Love, Daver
Wilson Avatar
July 18, 2008 at 4:16 PM
Michael, love the rhyme, and within the traditional count. Very memorable. Thanks.
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