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Tonight, Is Ours

With every note struck thunder rages with spirit off the piano keys, tornado spins out of control with the crescendo coming to a whisper and the music plays on as two lovers climb the black and white keys to heaven.
5/4/2019 Poetry Contest: Liberum Divisa Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden Stairway of Music to Heaven Fragrance of roses and grass dipped dew Moonlit night plays a solo of romance; “I will love you tonight” With every note struck thunder rages with spirit off the piano keys, tornado spins out of control with the crescendo coming to a whisper and the music plays on as two lovers climb the black and white keys to heaven. A sense of awe, as emotions of both spirit spin on tiptoes of each step of the keyboard with love caressing them tightly as they take each step flowing so elegantly. Voices tenderly laying their lips on their structure, blessing them with the song of the heart that says I love you. 1/12/2016 Copyright © E
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Sietesantos Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Hi Eve, this is rhapsodic - such a beautiful piece deserving of its high placement! Bravo, my friend and big congratulations on your win! Love and hugs. Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Oh Eve, I absolutely love this and I am so happy that you posted your original poem so I didn't have to go and hunt for it like I just did for Dale's. This gorgeous poem is going into my Faves! Congratulations on your deserving win of second-place! : ) xxoo
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 3:37 PM
I searched for it but couldn't find your original poem. Please send me the link so I can fave it Eve. Thanks, Connie
Faulkner Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Quite the seductive song, Eve, congratulations on your placement!
Faulkner Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Quite the seductive song, Eve, congratulations on your placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Nicely done, Eve!
Awtry Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 6:48 PM
Eve this is just gorgeous. I think it will do well in the contest :)
Wolf Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 8:11 PM
This blending of music and human passion is fascinating and so elegant. Bravo, Eve. :) gw
One Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 6:40 AM
You did this very well.. Love the last line, as you know I do like romantic musings...
Ball Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 12:34 AM
WoW! What a beautiful piece this is. The passion of the music just carries them away. I like it. God Bless, JB
Onclaud Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 6:39 PM
how dreamy is this heartfelt write, eve... winning wishes!...huggs
Sands Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Very nice Eve! I like the spin on tip toes line. This is beautiful :)
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 3:13 PM
- Really romantic ... so beautiful, Eve - A winning poem without a doubt :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:36 PM
This is such a beautiful write..delicate and tender...like romance is. All the best, Eve.
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