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With every note struck thunder rages with spirit off the piano keys, tornado spins out of control with the crescendo coming to a whisper and the music plays on as two lovers climb the black and white keys to heaven.
5/4/2019 Poetry Contest: Liberum Divisa Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden Stairway of Music to Heaven Fragrance of roses and grass dipped dew Moonlit night plays a solo of romance; “I will love you tonight” With every note struck thunder rages with spirit off the piano keys, tornado spins out of control with the crescendo coming to a whisper and the music plays on as two lovers climb the black and white keys to heaven. A sense of awe, as emotions of both spirit spin on tiptoes of each step of the keyboard with love caressing them tightly as they take each step flowing so elegantly. Voices tenderly laying their lips on their structure, blessing them with the song of the heart that says I love you. 1/12/2016 Copyright © E

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Date: 5/25/2019 7:54:00 PM
Hi Eve, this is rhapsodic - such a beautiful piece deserving of its high placement! Bravo, my friend and big congratulations on your win! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/24/2019 3:33:00 PM
Oh Eve, I absolutely love this and I am so happy that you posted your original poem so I didn't have to go and hunt for it like I just did for Dale's. This gorgeous poem is going into my Faves! Congratulations on your deserving win of second-place! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/24/2019 3:37:00 PM
I searched for it but couldn't find your original poem. Please send me the link so I can fave it Eve. Thanks, Connie
Date: 5/24/2019 12:05:00 PM
Quite the seductive song, Eve, congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 5/24/2019 12:05:00 PM
Quite the seductive song, Eve, congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 5/7/2019 9:55:00 PM
Nicely done, Eve!
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Date: 5/7/2019 6:48:00 PM
Eve this is just gorgeous. I think it will do well in the contest :)
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Date: 5/6/2019 8:11:00 PM
This blending of music and human passion is fascinating and so elegant. Bravo, Eve. :) gw
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Date: 5/5/2019 6:40:00 AM
You did this very well.. Love the last line, as you know I do like romantic musings...
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Date: 5/5/2019 12:34:00 AM
WoW! What a beautiful piece this is. The passion of the music just carries them away. I like it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/4/2019 6:39:00 PM
how dreamy is this heartfelt write, eve... winning wishes!...huggs
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Date: 5/4/2019 3:29:00 PM
Very nice Eve! I like the spin on tip toes line. This is beautiful :)
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Date: 5/4/2019 3:13:00 PM
- Really romantic ... so beautiful, Eve - A winning poem without a doubt :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/4/2019 2:36:00 PM
This is such a beautiful write..delicate and tender...like romance is. All the best, Eve.
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