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Tonight I Want You

Tonight I want you


to blend into blue
where sand 
meets sea...
to breath in heir
apparent that you understand
as Me...
tonight I want you
to hope upon a star
to wonderfully graze on starlight
for I know
that's what you are,

I felt you smile as you drifted
into Nod
and witnessed pure light
bourne of yr forehead
not from Aegean waters
but here on Cape Cod...

tonight I want you
to be where you
want to be...
to blend into blue
where sky meets the sea....

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Elaine George

January 2, 2010 at 6:19 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry, Andrew. Lainie

Nicole Sharon Brown

December 29, 2009 at 11:51 AM

Congrats on being featured this week. Have prosperous new year, and God bless you!

Sue Mason

December 29, 2009 at 11:46 AM

Great imagery in this wonderful write, Andrew. Fine selection to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 29, 2009 at 7:14 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Andrew. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

James Fraser

December 28, 2009 at 3:14 AM

Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James

Mark Riedel

December 23, 2009 at 7:51 AM

Thank you all for your generous comments...I haven't been writing much of late - I can be found at artwanted.com/andrewmarx. Peace be with you this holiday season!

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 23, 2009 at 3:17 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor Andrew and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

P Sheart

December 21, 2009 at 9:24 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

December 20, 2009 at 1:45 PM

Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Andrew! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

December 20, 2009 at 11:05 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Audrey Haick

December 15, 2009 at 5:06 PM

Beautiful write, Andrew. I especially love the last verse! Congratulations on your poem being featured for the week! Peace and love, Audrey P.S. Have a Merry Christmas!

James Fraser

December 15, 2009 at 12:31 PM

Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James

Robin Maughan

December 15, 2009 at 5:54 AM

Congrats on the feature! Drifted into Nod ..love it! HUgs, Robin Maughan

Anthony Nutter

December 15, 2009 at 2:11 AM

Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Ravindra K Kapoor

December 14, 2009 at 6:36 PM

Beautiful poem and very lovely lines to blend into blue. Congrats with Best wishes and love for Xmas and the coming new year. Hope you would find my last two poems Wake up... and In praise … worth reading Ravindra