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Tongue Twister Time

Tongue Twister Time Lanky Louie fell in love with the last love of his life, The luster lasted a really long time, Then suddenly Lanky Louie’s love left! Feeling lethargic, listless and lovesick, With lingering memories, of his last love lost, Lanky Louie’s life still lonely, but Soothed by the luster he has left! Tongue Twister Line: "Last love lost, is the loneliest love, when the lingering love left is luster!" Written: © 11/2/16 Submitted For: Tongue Twister Time Contest Sponsored By: Mystic Rose

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Date: 11/13/2016 3:59:00 AM
A greatly done tongue twisting poem, Sarita:)
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 11/13/2016 8:33:00 AM
Again, I thank you for embracing my work!!
Date: 11/12/2016 10:20:00 AM
I suppose lost love would leave me tongue tied, too, Sarita! Enjoyed your take on this contest theme. Good luck & Regards // paul
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 11/12/2016 10:32:00 AM
LOL, Paul ;-) Thanks for the visit and the "Good Luck!"
Date: 11/2/2016 5:17:00 PM
I love it, Mrs Sarita. Good luck:)
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 11/2/2016 6:05:00 PM
Thank you Daniel :-)
Date: 11/2/2016 4:22:00 PM
That is definitely a tongue twister. Nicely done Sarita.
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 11/2/2016 4:26:00 PM
Thank's Chris ;->

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