Sarita Milliner Poet Rhyme

Tongue Twister Time

Tongue Twister Time

Lanky Louie fell in love with the last love of his life,
The luster lasted a really long time,
Then suddenly Lanky Louie’s love left!
Feeling lethargic, listless and lovesick,
With lingering memories, of his last love lost,
Lanky Louie’s life still lonely, but
Soothed by the luster he has left!


Tongue Twister Line:

"Last love lost, is the loneliest love, when the lingering love left is luster!"

Written: © 11/2/16
Submitted For: Tongue Twister Time Contest
Sponsored By: Mystic Rose

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Joanna Daniel November 13, 2016 at 3:59 AM A greatly done tongue twisting poem, Sarita:) Sarita Milliner November 13, 2016 at 8:33 AM Again, I thank you for embracing my work!!

Paul Callus November 12, 2016 at 10:20 AM I suppose lost love would leave me tongue tied, too, Sarita! Enjoyed your take on this contest theme. Good luck & Regards // paul Sarita Milliner November 12, 2016 at 10:32 AM LOL, Paul ;-) Thanks for the visit and the "Good Luck!"

Daniel Turner November 2, 2016 at 5:17 PM I love it, Mrs Sarita. Good luck:) Sarita Milliner November 2, 2016 at 6:05 PM Thank you Daniel :-)

Chris Green November 2, 2016 at 4:22 PM That is definitely a tongue twister. Nicely done Sarita. Sarita Milliner November 2, 2016 at 4:26 PM Thank's Chris ;->