Tongue Twister

Come hither, Mister Delicious Sir.
Satiate my craving for saturating kisses.

Read these ready lips like romance fiction.
Practice your best parched desert depiction.

Slurp up this mist smorgasbord to savor
cherry chapstick and cinnamon disk's flavor.

Caress love's breath, pressed against companion lips.
Twist with saliva's textured slides and slips.

Play tongue tag like young ones chasing.
Stencil silent speech, each moment embracing.

Sip freely from the flowing fountain of Venus.
Spin to the rhythm of the heartbeat between us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Inman Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Lovely alliteration Juliet
Carber Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 10:03 AM
congrats Juliet (it left me kinda warm!)
Krampe Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Congrats on your placement, Juliet.
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:29 PM
A fun read, Juliet. Congrats on your win.
Carmack Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:07 PM
My favorite among the placements. Congrats.
One Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 3:54 PM
You are a talented poet...its a shame you do not write more
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Judging by the comments this one was a winner, it certainly reads as such. Well done.
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Way to go with this winner..Congrats.Sara
Horsch Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 8:27 AM
Another wonderful win Juliet, I love the amount of description in your poetry. Your a very good writer.....Hugs.....Roger
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 7:41 PM
Lovely poem with alliteration and congratulations on your fine win, Juliet
Harper Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 2:41 PM
Lovely romantic come hither poem, Juliet, I especially love how your use of alliteration enhance your rich use of detail. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest!
Dome Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 6:31 PM
Great write. well done. best wishes. Pete.
Horsch Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 5:07 PM
Oh Juliet, Your so silly. A good idea for a wonderfully written poem....Hugs...Roger
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 3:45 PM
and a very sensuous tongue twister it is!!
Andresen Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 4:23 AM
- Oh, Juliet.... so lovely and sweet poem....love it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ellison Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:40 PM
OKAY! Ya got me with this one... I WILL be back! Love and hugs, Jack xox
Tacito Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Ahh, the descriptions here were delicious & blunt. I highly enjoyed this! :)
Rhinem Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 1:30 PM
† Soft As Slow Or, Intense In Swallow; Beautiful! ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ Love John
Mehta Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely romantic write with equally lovely alliteration, Juliet
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