Tongue Twister

Come hither, Mister Delicious Sir.
Satiate my craving for saturating kisses.

Read these ready lips like romance fiction.
Practice your best parched desert depiction.

Slurp up this mist smorgasbord to savor
cherry chapstick and cinnamon disk's flavor.

Caress love's breath, pressed against companion lips.
Twist with saliva's textured slides and slips.

Play tongue tag like young ones chasing.
Stencil silent speech, each moment embracing.

Sip freely from the flowing fountain of Venus.
Spin to the rhythm of the heartbeat between us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/27/2018 8:30:00 PM
Lovely alliteration Juliet
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Date: 4/26/2018 10:03:00 AM
congrats Juliet (it left me kinda warm!)
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Date: 4/26/2018 7:23:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Juliet.
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Date: 4/25/2018 11:29:00 PM
A fun read, Juliet. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/25/2018 10:07:00 PM
My favorite among the placements. Congrats.
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Date: 1/28/2018 3:54:00 PM
You are a talented poet...its a shame you do not write more
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Date: 1/21/2014 9:49:00 PM
Judging by the comments this one was a winner, it certainly reads as such. Well done.
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Date: 12/30/2013 12:47:00 PM
Way to go with this winner..Congrats.Sara
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Date: 12/27/2013 8:27:00 AM
Another wonderful win Juliet, I love the amount of description in your poetry. Your a very good writer.....Hugs.....Roger
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Date: 12/26/2013 7:41:00 PM
Lovely poem with alliteration and congratulations on your fine win, Juliet
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Date: 12/26/2013 2:41:00 PM
Lovely romantic come hither poem, Juliet, I especially love how your use of alliteration enhance your rich use of detail. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest!
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Date: 12/25/2013 6:31:00 PM
Great write. well done. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 12/19/2013 5:07:00 PM
Oh Juliet, Your so silly. A good idea for a wonderfully written poem....Hugs...Roger
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Date: 12/4/2013 3:45:00 PM
and a very sensuous tongue twister it is!!
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:23:00 AM
- Oh, Juliet.... so lovely and sweet poem....love it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:40:00 PM
OKAY! Ya got me with this one... I WILL be back! Love and hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 12/2/2013 11:47:00 AM
Ahh, the descriptions here were delicious & blunt. I highly enjoyed this! :)
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Date: 12/1/2013 1:30:00 PM
† Soft As Slow Or, Intense In Swallow; Beautiful! ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ Love John
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Date: 12/1/2013 12:00:00 AM
Lovely romantic write with equally lovely alliteration, Juliet
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