Tongue Tied

Now, as soon as I put you on my tongue,
I bite down, just to get a better grip,
Then use my tongue to bend you like a clip,
As I try to hold the breath in my lungs.
Between my teeth and tongue, you have been hung,
Therefore, against yourself I make you flip,
Then dip, as in between yourself you slip
Your tip, and on my lip you become flung.
I survey you the moment I am done,
Using my tongue to flip you on both sides,
Since the end results prove that I have won;
An accomplishment that I will not hide.
The experience itself has been fun,
And the stem of the cherry has been tied.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 22, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Of course you know Doc. thanks for enjoying the Late comeback.. Glad you enjoyed it.. Sorry it took long to get back to you... Your solo rounds you made on my behalf where awesome,..p..d
Neels Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Wow I love the concept of this one., enjoyed it, had me :) rgds WN Thank you for your kind comments on mine as well
A   Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 11:49 AM
Okay, Doc. you are bad, but good. I hope you and Sarah, finish all them rounds. This poem is awesome,..pd..
Hales Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Wowowow .... What can we say to that ? full of well i am speechless sarah my turn now x
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