Tongue Tide

when your mouth runs off without your brain
a ripple of waves in low tide


2/19/23
A Ripple To Me 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor-JCB Brul
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Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Love the monoku as well as the title!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:30 PM
Ooh boy! Congratulations!
Woodrow Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:58 PM
good one!! :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 4:06 PM
oh what a great way to express that
Fowler Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 7:28 AM
LOL. Very true Connie Congratulations on your win! :)
Rolland Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 6:52 PM
exquisite, and very evocative, love the monoku style have a nice day yann
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