Tone

There is a hole Over powering [come] tone besiege it they came with one tone after the other. [run] A deathly tone Over kill. [cry] they cry out for help, [stop] I said! [look] and suddenly, there comes the roaring light with a brighter tone [scattered] [confused] [weary] there can only be one tone.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/11/2024 9:34:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.