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Tomorrow's Eyes

Everything is magic in disguise, and so I am careful to mask the innocence. Smiles of branded plastic that is painted on with paper needles. To begin, one must slither on the ground of deception. Isolate the tunnels of arrival even before the truth survives. And so I am cautious about opening my thoughts to any careless stranger floating by. Instead I hinder perception with convoluted words. Vines of strangling force corrupt, and so I debate with myself the wisdom of letting the roots of my life be open for business. Better to wrap myself in leaves of lies that will hide away the wounded feathers of tomorrow's eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/27/2010 2:00:00 PM
Thanks for the welcome. Frankly I am already finding the "captcha" thing extremely irritating!
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Date: 6/26/2010 10:48:00 PM
Hey Chris, I do understand your feelings, but I believe that in opening up, you share your wisdom with others and in some way speak the words someone somewhere needs to hear. Why care what others may say or think about you? Their opinions do not count as they are still strangers, right now. Besides don't be surprised that none of us is perfect! So I hope you let those words pressing at the gates of your heart, flow wild and free!! Thnx for the comments. Welcome to PS! Enjoy! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 6/26/2010 1:19:00 PM
Maybe so. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/26/2010 12:51:00 PM
I can see the inner protection hiding here I can understand ... sarah x
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