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Tomorrow Shall Bring:

Tomorrow shall bring waterfalls on a rainbow, Just as your love shall bring happiness and glee, No one can ever predict just how things go, The future holding what we shall all see. Just as your love shall bring happiness and glee, In tomorrow's dreams, our reality will flow, The future holding what we shall all see, The truth of it all is we all want to know. In tomorrow's dreams, our reality will flow, No one can ever predict just how things go, The truth of it all is we all want to know, Tomorrow shall bring waterfalls on a rainbow.
6~June~2017 For Pantoum Form contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper
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Roper Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 8:15 PM
A wonderful poem and a beautiful picture to compliment it ,WW, congratulations on your win ~*
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Thank you very much, Eve /|\
Smith Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Great write and win my friend ;)
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Thank you so much, Jeremy /|\
Sietesantos Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 1:51 PM
White Wolf, this is perfection - in form, flow, message, and imagery! I love it! Wish I could conceive one such as this! A 10 from me as well! Pandita
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Wow, what a lovely compliment! Thank you very much, Pandita! /|\
Daniel Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Nice one, Rick, I like this pantoum very much, a 10 from me:)
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Thank you, Jo /|\
Green Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Really nicely crafted my friend. I wrote one of these, they are not easy. This one works well. Best wishes in the contest
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:38 AM
Yeah, this one was my first attempt! So, I'm not really bothered! Haha, thanks mate /|\
Smith Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 10:33 PM
Excellent Budgie...flows very well
Wolf Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Thanks, Tim /|\
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