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Tomorrow shall bring waterfalls on a rainbow, Just as your love shall bring happiness and glee, No one can ever predict just how things go, The future holding what we shall all see. Just as your love shall bring happiness and glee, In tomorrow's dreams, our reality will flow, The future holding what we shall all see, The truth of it all is we all want to know. In tomorrow's dreams, our reality will flow, No one can ever predict just how things go, The truth of it all is we all want to know, Tomorrow shall bring waterfalls on a rainbow.
6~June~2017 For Pantoum Form contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 7/4/2017 8:15:00 PM
A wonderful poem and a beautiful picture to compliment it ,WW, congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 7/4/2017 9:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve /|\
Date: 7/3/2017 9:26:00 PM
Great write and win my friend ;)
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Date: 7/4/2017 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeremy /|\
Date: 6/6/2017 1:51:00 PM
White Wolf, this is perfection - in form, flow, message, and imagery! I love it! Wish I could conceive one such as this! A 10 from me as well! Pandita
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Date: 6/6/2017 1:54:00 PM
Wow, what a lovely compliment! Thank you very much, Pandita! /|\
Date: 6/6/2017 10:11:00 AM
Nice one, Rick, I like this pantoum very much, a 10 from me:)
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Date: 6/6/2017 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Jo /|\
Date: 6/6/2017 7:30:00 AM
Really nicely crafted my friend. I wrote one of these, they are not easy. This one works well. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 6/6/2017 7:38:00 AM
Yeah, this one was my first attempt! So, I'm not really bothered! Haha, thanks mate /|\
Date: 6/5/2017 10:33:00 PM
Excellent Budgie...flows very well
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Date: 6/5/2017 10:34:00 PM
Thanks, Tim /|\

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