Tomorrow

This day has not seen the sunlight
It feels the night finds no excuses 
For the darkness of this day
I cannot put my mind to bed

       Please.... O God, 
           lift the mist that fogs my eyes
                and let tomorrow come upon a bright sunrise!

Let new grasses wave in a new wind.....tomorrow
Let white buds blur our orchard lanes again.
Let clouds rise for a brief flying....tomorrow...
And earth feel the tiny feet of rain.

Streams will wash their pebbles white....tomorrow
Each shaken fern will yield a twinkling shower,
Meadowlarks will spend their songs....tomorrow...
And sun-drenched clearings will be glad with flower

The wide lift of blue sky.....tomorrow....
Will glimmer from beyond each leafing bough...
I will walk out into the woods ..... tomorrow....
                                                       tomorrow.....

Thank you, O God,
                 ....I will be able to sleep now.....and dream 
                                                                      of  a bright tomorrow...

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/10/2011 1:43:00 PM
Very inspirational. Congratulaions! Tony
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Date: 11/9/2011 4:50:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on second place win for this inspirational prayer luv..
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Date: 11/9/2011 1:08:00 PM
I hope your mind gets to bed and these beautiful thoughts turn into a bright new day :) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/9/2011 7:31:00 AM
This is soooo good Carrie. Love "the tiny feet of rain" Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/9/2011 6:06:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 11/9/2011 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Compose A Prayer"contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2010 1:00:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/4/2010 11:27:00 PM
Beautiful and amazing, sounds like a lullaby...Raul
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Date: 2/3/2010 9:23:00 AM
What a beautiful hope in Tomorrow, which would shine in different colors covering the melodies of the Nature's Meadowlarks, even for us all. Thanks for such a beautiful Poem. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:52:00 PM
Dear Carrie, my congratulations on your poem winning a place in the contest! And thannks for reading my poems and leaving your comments for me. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/1/2010 7:32:00 PM
For some reason this reminded me of "Gone with the Wind" Where Scarlett says, "I'll think about that tomorrow!" Beautiful poem Carrie...Love it...Marty
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:45:00 PM
Carrie, Your beautiful poem expresses the true meaning of having faith. I have put it in my favorite poem file. Congratulations on your honorable mention win. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:39:00 AM
How lovely. Copngratulations on a beautiful poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2010 7:14:00 AM
Carrie, these words that glorify our creator and His creations are lovely. Your creativity blooms through your words. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:39:00 AM
Tomorrow has again become today, thank God, and you can awake to another HM, Carrie! Congratulations to you..and thanks again. Robert
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Date: 1/31/2010 4:29:00 PM
Good luck in this contest, Carrie. Another great one. ................... Okay I give up.. What happened to our poems in the" romantic longing" sonnett contest? Do you know, Carrie?
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Date: 1/31/2010 2:14:00 PM
Simply awesome! Carrie! WOW! Fabulous imagery and a great lesson at the same time to think of things of beauty, things that inspires when life is stressful and we have a hard to rest at night. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind review on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/31/2010 10:00:00 AM
Carrie, I LOVE This entry for faith. I think you should do very very well with it. So much imagery. It is exactly what it says it is: FAith in tomorrow! Into favs! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/31/2010 9:47:00 AM
Oh, those restless nights...Yet your faith and optimism shine through at the end!....This is a side of you I have not seen since I have been reading you poetry, Carrie...and I love it! Sounds like a winner to me! - Tim
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Date: 1/31/2010 9:42:00 AM
A very uplifting write, Carrie. Thinking of all the beauty that awaits us "tomorrow" can surely help us make it through the troubling times. This is a great write about faith and hope and I wish you well in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/31/2010 9:20:00 AM
So beautiful....almost brought tears to my eyes...such hope...thank you!!
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Date: 1/31/2010 8:34:00 AM
Excellent write with great imagery with a most pleasing ending.
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Date: 1/31/2010 8:33:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and welcome comments today
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