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Tomorrow Poem Lionel Derbyshire A beautiful night.. Raptures delight Light's shimmers bright Fresh and moist is the air A moon a blushing the stars they quietly take their seats the waves orderly cleans the sea everything sync together to make another day which GOD has made. See it again tomorrow night wherever you stay or stray. Betwixt here and there And in between there are Miserable mulish miscreants hub Those who want to close our drawer Of our universe. They are perverse And temper bad They headstrong, they err. Too few pleasant mickey mice And no more happy donald ducks Once a time this planet was nice When I was younger Now war hungry men With angry mind's Are gunning down bullets Blood everwhere.. Peace is out of touch. Belly's with empty tummy's In broken down dwellings and alley's. They dread the beautiful night. Their light's are out. Gunsmoke in their air. Another new day They will not see again. Give peace and love a chance Today.. Live sensible and be around for Tomorrow..

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Date: 11/3/2023 10:56:00 AM
This is so well written and expressed Lionel. Very powerful. Love the lines,’ A moon a blushing’ ‘ the stars quietly take their seats’ especially. Great imagery. Love the message conveyed in the last stanza. Really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing :)
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Lionel Derbyshire
Date: 11/3/2023 10:32:00 PM
Wow your note overjoys me .. Christina you are a star in this planet !!!!
Date: 10/23/2023 8:06:00 PM
great flow of consciousness, intriguing, bold, unexpected - glad I found your work
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Lionel Derbyshire
Date: 10/23/2023 10:04:00 PM
Sir I am overjoyed and grateful by your commentry and discussion .. I see your name and I will follow you.

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