Tomorrow

A door to the unknown,
Hidden in time,
A ladder standing alone,
No foot is yet to climb.

A place in the future,
Vaguely scripted by the sages, 
A book with unseen pages,
Life's unveiled miniature.

Shadow of a new day,
Shielded from the ray,
At the onset of twilight,
It walks towards the light.

No one has travelled to its space,
It’s beyond human's pace, 
A peek into its chamber,
Will refrain the soul from hurting slumber.



April 13, 2023.
Writing Challenge - 'T' Words - Poetry Contest,
Constance La France.
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Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 11:22 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... tomorrow is a fresh new day, Thompson ... a lovely poem :) -
Emate Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 8:41 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. I'm honoured.
La France Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 3:04 PM
Thompson, thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge !
Emate Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 6:24 PM
You're welcome. I'm honoured.
Fowler Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 9:52 AM
Hi Thompson. The mystery of tomorrow is always with us. I particularly like your first stanza. Congratulations on your win! :)
Emate Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Thank you, Linda. It's an honour.
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...thompson
Emate Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Thank you, Alfonso. I'm honoured.
Evans Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 7:19 AM
I am truly impressed by the beauty and depth of this poem. Your use of imagery is masterful, painting a vivid picture of a place in the future that is still shrouded in mystery and waiting to be discovered.
Emate Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Thank you, Maya. I'm honoured.
Turner Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 9:06 AM
A lot of great analogies, Thompson. Well written.
Emate Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 12:12 PM
Thank you, Daniel. Blessings.
Logan Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 8:56 AM
And the hope we find in tomorrow is that another will follow... and then another.
Emate Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Truly said, Jenna. Blessings.
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