Tomorrow

Yesterday Asians, Jews today
Yet Native Americans pray,
"To settle a score
Grant us love, not war,
So children can go out to play!"

culturepeacewarlimerick

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Jan Allison

May 24, 2021 at 2:43 PM

I'm more used to your humourous poems , this one comes with a powerful message:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

May 24, 2021 at 12:07 PM

Quite a profound limerick, Rico. I wonder if we will ever find peace among people of all nationalities. A powerful message, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Susan Lawrence

May 23, 2021 at 8:15 AM

Love will always win . The heart expands indefinitely.... The children are our future . Wonderful Limerick ! Hugs, Susan :)

Lindsay Laurie

May 22, 2021 at 6:22 PM

Hello Rico ... at this time there appears to be so much hate and blame. If it's war people want they should be careful about what they wish for - great limerick Rico - Lindsay

Alexis Y.

May 22, 2021 at 1:03 PM

Hi Rico, I agree we need love and not war. Let's hope for a better tomorrow—great message in your Limerick. A fave for me. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis