Tomorrow

Yesterday Asians, Jews today Yet Native Americans pray, "To settle a score Grant us love, not war, So children can go out to play!"

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/24/2021 2:43:00 PM

I'm more used to your humourous poems , this one comes with a powerful message:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2021 12:07:00 PM

Quite a profound limerick, Rico. I wonder if we will ever find peace among people of all nationalities. A powerful message, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/23/2021 8:15:00 AM

Love will always win . The heart expands indefinitely.... The children are our future . Wonderful Limerick ! Hugs, Susan :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/22/2021 6:22:00 PM

Hello Rico ... at this time there appears to be so much hate and blame. If it's war people want they should be careful about what they wish for - great limerick Rico - Lindsay

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/22/2021 1:03:00 PM

Hi Rico, I agree we need love and not war. Let's hope for a better tomorrow—great message in your Limerick. A fave for me. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/22/2021 11:51:00 AM

We live in hope Rico, its always the kids who suffer the most, Tom

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/22/2021 11:39:00 AM

Oh, please "grant us love, not war so children can go out to play"!!! Thank you, Rico.