Tommy's War

Tommy joined up in 1914
Though he was really too young
He was just seventeen

They gave him a uniform 
They gave him a gun
They sent him to France to fight the Hun

Why he was fighting he wasn't sure
He was an innocent victim 
Of a terrible war

He stood in a trench in water and mud
He watched as his comrades
Gave their life blood

His friend Johnny Laine stood at his side
A snipers bullet hit home
And young Johnny died

His tunic was splattered with Johnny's blood
Tommy's eyes filled with tears
As he lay in the mud

Tommy looked up to Heaven and angrily swore 
That never again
Would he go to war

Just six months later his promise came true
As a snipers bullet
Pierced him right through

As he lay dying on that cruel day
This brave young man 
Was heard to say

Johnny I'm coming we'll be together again
Far away from the trenches 
Far away from the rain

So Johnny and Tommy are together once more
Where no bullets are flying
Where there is no war




So like Tommy lets swear as he did before
Never again 
Will we go to war

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/23/2019 6:05:00 PM
Hi Denis, what a beautiful flowing poem about a futile waste of young lives in war, something to which I have written myself. I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours, kindest regards, Kevin
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Date: 5/20/2019 10:40:00 AM
What an awesome pen Denis a fine tribute to fallen soldiers
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