Tommys Christmas Wish

TOMMY’S CHRISTMAS WISH

Tommy was a wee young boy,
And asked mommy to write and
Ask Santa for a special toy
Tommy was only four years old,
And lived with Mommy,
As his Daddy,
Brad, had gone to Canada,
To find a job,
The family was poor, and he
Had to make an extra bob!
What is daddy like he asked
His mom
Tommy’s mom began to hum
A song that her son 
Well remembered,
And that she knew 
Tommy treasured.
Her husband had been away
From home for over a year,
This brought a tear
To her eye for Tommy’s sake,
He had not really known
His dad, this made her sad,
And hoped that Brad,
Would soon be back.	
Tommy read his mom’s thoughts
And asked that she must please
Ask Santa to bring him back,
That’s all he wanted for Christmas,
As he missed dad and loved
Him a stack!
Tommy dozed off to sleep
And mother Sandy knelt
Down to pray,
Please God let Brad,
Come back even for
Just a day !
In Iceland, Santa had started
Packing his toys 
Right for the boys and 
Left for the girls
Those were the ones,
He had tied with
Frills, whirls and curls!
Elfs, pixies and Mrs. Santa too,
All helped, they made a 
Magnificent crew.
Santa was tired as he
Packed the last toy 
On his sleigh,
When he noticed a letter
Floating his way!
It was marked express mail,
And Santa read it as he did
All his mail, without fail!
After he had finished reading
Tommy’s letter from his mum,
He patted his plump tum,
And rubbed his beard,
He knew where Tommy’s
Dad was,
Because,
He had in error received 
A similar letter from Brad,
Tommy’s Dad,
That he was soon coming back.
He was so sorry,
He was away so long,
He was working as a lumberjack
They no longer had to worry
He had made money, enough 
And he was hitching a ride
With Santa, great stuff!
For Santa had replied to Brad,
And told him to be on the ready,
And look out for a sleigh
That was fast and not too steady,
For Santa was getting old,
And not quite as fast or bold!
Santa picked up Tommy’s dad
From Canada,
Hey Santa, said Brad,
You really do exist,
Woaah!  Drive carefully,
There’s a lot of Mist!
We’re landing, said Santa
Put on your belt,
Such fascination and awe,
Brad had never felt!
Loaded with presents,
He tiptoed into Tommy’s room
And woke up his son,
There was such excitement
Second to none,
Both were over come
And wept with joy,
Sandy heard the noise,
And ran to Tommy room,
Happy Christmas darling he said,
And Sandy cried,
As she hugged her two boys!
It was Christmas day,
And Tommy and Sandy’s
Wish had come true,
Hope that families apart on
This joyous day
Come together, 
For that we all pray!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/7/2018 2:27:00 AM
What a wonderful, tear jerking poem. My wish is that many families get together this year and celebrate love, kindness and happiness. Life is precious and can be short. Kim
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Date: 12/9/2018 12:13:00 AM
Hi Kim, My wish is the same! Not only are we Virgos and have all the Virgo traits but our wedding anniversaries are a day apart, yours today and ours tomorrow! Happy Anniversary Kim and Graham - be blessed always! Thank-you for your comment Kim and enjoy your day today!
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Date: 12/7/2018 8:36:00 AM
You are so right Kim, and sad that many won't be, for they may have no family left, through perhaps the trauma of war, or simply growing very very old and surviving your, whole family! Thank you for your lovely comment, Hugs, Jenny.
Date: 12/6/2018 10:12:00 AM
A breeze of bliss, a rainbow of hope, poetry in abundance giving sweet dimensions for dreaming big, satisfying desires and wishes! A poetess with a masterful wand spelling her magic on her heartfelt and expressive words to create a work of beauty that goes deep in the heart and into my fave list. If only we could turn a nightmare into a dream! If only we could heal every carved pain and wipe out every single tear of a deprived child! A brilliant work worthy of honour dear Jennifer love and hugs.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/6/2018 1:34:00 PM
Hi Besma, Glad its gone into your fav. list. Nightmares are such a frightful invasion - we are not conscious or unconscious and evil works its way into our dreams turning them sometimes into horrific nightmares. As for the poor, hungry and depraved children of this world, they break my heart - I wish I could be Santa every day of the year and shower them with food shelter, hope and love! Thank-you for a beautiful comment Besma, Love and kisses, Jennifer.
Date: 12/6/2018 12:52:00 AM
A beautiful way to start the evening, but I am just now reading it at evening's end. It is still beautiful, and heart-felt, and fun to read! Nice job, Jennifer, as usual.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/6/2018 1:44:00 AM
Hi Caren, i'm glad that you sat and relaxed and enjoyed my poem. I also happy that you thought it heartfelt as that was the underlying motif throughout my poem. Hugs and kisses, Jeennifer
Date: 12/5/2018 8:13:00 PM
G'day Jennifer … apart from being a positive Christmas story, it's a wonderful children's story. Very nice; well done - Lindsay
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/5/2018 11:34:00 PM
Hi Lindsay, So Rico says also. But the competition out there to even have one poem noticed must be intense. Perhaps I should give it a bash! Thank for your comment Lindsay, i'll look into it. Best wishes Jennifer.
Date: 12/5/2018 2:00:00 PM
Well done, Jennifer! Couldn't you put your husband to work publishing your work in children's books? Aloha! Rico
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/5/2018 2:22:00 PM
Hi Rico, That's an idea, I'll ask him! Thank-you for your comment Rico. Yasou, Jennifer
Date: 12/5/2018 12:19:00 PM
What a lovely Christmas story Jennifer. And you taking those toys to an orphanege is really amazing, the true spirit of Christmas. I hope you are rewarded for such a kind act. Tom.
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Date: 12/5/2018 12:49:00 PM
Hi Tom, So glad you enjoyed it. I wish I could win the lottery and I would give to the old and lonely, and the young and poor. I enjoy your comments, each and every one and look forward to them. All the best Tom and thank you for a very kind comment. Jennifer.
Date: 12/5/2018 11:06:00 AM
What a beautiful story with the happiest ending of all. This was wonderful Jennifer and such a treasure for this time of year.
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Date: 12/5/2018 11:19:00 AM
Thank-you Chris, i have just packed all my sons toys that I had kept, and will be taking them to an orphanage tomorrow. I feel so sad for the children in war torn countries, afraid and cold and in poor 3rd world countries. My wish is that it pours happiness, peace and presents for them all. Best wishes Chris, Jennifer.
Date: 12/5/2018 11:04:00 AM
So glad that Tommy got his wish. Families should be together for Christmas whenever possible and Santa was kind enough to deliver Brad along with all the toys. Enjoyed your story told in lovely verse, Jennifer. I'm sending wishes for happy holidays out to you! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/5/2018 11:12:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, Lovely to hear from you. Yes, Tommy got his wish just as we hope all the children of the world will. Unfortunately however, poverty is so rife in many 3rd world countries, that this will not be possible! Thank-you for a lovely comment! Carolyn! Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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