Tommy

Today is a blank sheet Oh! What desires I need to meet Must some go lacking Most important are the people You being one that needs my attention

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/2/2024 11:48:00 AM

Enjoyed this first poem of yours, Sara! The angst of desires agains the work and person that must be attended to.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/2/2024 2:45:00 PM

Kim, Thanks for going back and reading something from way in the past. I have gone back in there once and reworked it. Sara K

Eve Roper

Date: 2/24/2022 10:28:00 PM

Hello, Sara, I wanted to read your first poem. Great Acrostic, is Tommy your son. Blessings my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/25/2022 4:24:00 AM

Eve, Yes, my husband and son are both named Tommy but it is my husband I am speaking about in this one. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/14/2017 9:13:00 PM

Such a beautiful first poem on Soup Sara and I love your first line! How wondrously poetic and expressive those few words are. Your acrostic is captivating and caring. Enjoyed! Thank you for visiting my poems Sara...

Constance La France

Date: 3/4/2015 4:48:00 PM

Sara, I wanted to read your first poem, and glad I did, Acrostic has always been one of my fav forms, one can do a lot with this form and thanks for visiting my poetry today . . .

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/20/2014 7:59:00 PM

Taking time to visit the first's poems, A pleasure to read yours, I didn't know what acrostic was when I came here, I notice you have poems of every form and it inspires me. I look forward to learning from, and reading you :)

Robert Nehls

Date: 6/18/2014 2:18:00 PM

Thought I'd go back and read your very first poem. I liked it. Short and to the point. There are many things that need to be done every day but if there are loved one that need our attention then most things can be set aside. To give of ourselves to another is truly God's work. Very nice.... Robert.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/25/2013 8:24:00 PM

I wanted to read the first poem that you posted on the soup and I see you have been at this for some time. You have written a lot of poems. That is a great achievement. Very nice acrostic. What inspired this I wonder.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/29/2013 8:17:00 AM

Dear Sara, this is certainly a cleverly conceived acrostic. Big applause for that my friend. Your first poem was a pleasure to read as well as your other work. Love and Light......Mustapha.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/12/2013 6:41:00 PM

Dear Sara, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. A very Warm Welcome to the Soup with this fantastic Acrostic."Today is a blank sheet" but soon to be filled with the story of Tommy (Your son I presume.) Congratulations on a well deserved Feature"Today" LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Ashley Last

Date: 3/11/2013 3:04:00 PM

Wow. That was really good. Best acrostic I've ever had the pleasure of reading.

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/2/2012 3:30:00 PM

your first poem posted on soup Sara, from page 45. and what a wonder it is....Tommy. please tell me about Tommy,., love Harry

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/7/2010 3:52:00 PM

nice piece here Sara thank you duncan

Constance La France

Date: 10/3/2010 3:36:00 AM

Today is a blank sheet.. how wonderful is that to comptemplate, each day new to begin anew ~~

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/6/2009 6:29:00 AM

nicely penned, you are the minister mom

Pretty Feet

Date: 9/18/2009 7:40:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your acrostic Sara. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Thanks for your comment and welcome.

Abraham L

Date: 8/29/2009 8:47:00 AM

Nice, i love this one abe

Diane Christian

Date: 6/29/2009 6:45:00 AM

congratulations on your poem being featured God bless you from diane

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2009 3:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Sara. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/29/2009 12:54:00 AM

Hello and welcome to the soupland. Congratulations on your featured poetry. Mine is also feature this week. God bless. Ernilando

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/18/2009 1:47:00 PM

This is excellent! We all have decisions to make each day. The most important is the one before us. I like the focusing of this poem and how it pertains to the moment. Great job! ~Joseph

James Fraser

Date: 5/16/2009 11:44:00 PM

Well written poem Sara, and welcome to PS, James

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/10/2009 4:23:00 AM

Nicely written! Welcome to the soup! Please keep posting. - jeremiah

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/8/2009 9:31:00 AM

Sara, Your poem is well written. It uplifts. Thank you for caring and thinking of fellow man. Drop by drop, goodness shall flow a river of love for World Peace... my prayer. Keep writing. And welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Dane

Tykeia Lake

Date: 5/8/2009 9:28:00 AM

very nice and desriptive..keep up the good work and welcome to Poetry Soup.. -Tykeia Lake

David Smalling

Date: 5/8/2009 6:45:00 AM

Very concisely phrased ... an excellent achievement in the form ... love the philanthropy in it. Bravo