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Tombs Deep Within

Precipitation continuously falls Nary dry spot upon all the walls Stuck inside in the dark gloom The gramineae's glume Untouched though. Tombs' Far below Vaults deep in earth's womb Caskets drenched may flow in flumes Nothing can stop the rainfall or stalls Precipitation continuously falls
Contest: Writing Challenge-Andaree Form Sponsor: Constance Written: 01-22-2023 Matthew 23:27-28 New International Version 27 “Woe to you, teachers of the law and Pharisees, you hypocrites! You are like whitewashed tombs, which look beautiful on the outside but on the inside are full of the bones of the dead and everything unclean. 28 In the same way, on the outside you appear to people as righteous but on the inside you are full of hypocrisy and wickedness.
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La France Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Sara, nice write and pic, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, Constance
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. Sara
George Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 11:35 PM
'Stuck inside the dark gloom'- the very phrase expresses the loneliness and melancholy of one carrying tombs within. Congratulations Sara on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 4:17 AM
Valsa, Thanks for the kind and understanding comment. I appreciate you dropping by. It is always interesting to learn what a poem brings to the surface in a reader. Sara
Buehler Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sara. This is a beautifully written piece. Blessings.
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 11:47 AM
Thank you, Evelyn for dropping by to say congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 5:48 AM
You have changed your contest poem I think. Very spiritual.
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 7:12 AM
Yes, Victor, I changed it. Thanks for noticing. Sara
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