Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Tomato Soup

"Life can be short so lick the plate/bowl with your tongue. Let your                                                                              tongue be a sponge." Quote By Poet  



I set sail off on the red sea,                                               I needed to get away and see what I could see.                   On the red sea the day turned very hot,                             I was boiling like I was in a pot.                                           To cool off~I jumped into the red sea on the spot,               Was I in a hot crock pot.                                                     It felt like I was swimming in a hot bowl of tomato soup,       Turns out~I was swimming with the soup group. 


Date Written: 4/28/2022 

3 Place

A Merger With Food Contest Judged: 7/2/2022 
Sponsored by: Natasha L Scragg

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Valsa George July 2, 2022 at 8:37 PM This is so very interesting ! I couldn't think of writing anything on this topic ! You have done it gracefully.....dear Paula! Congratulations on your win Paula Goldsmith July 3, 2022 at 11:57 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this Tomato Soup win. Glad you like my fun/cute soup write. Have a great/blessed weekend..........

Howard Kerr July 2, 2022 at 1:29 PM Hi Paula, Thanks for your soupmail regarding my selection. Congratulations to you as well for this extremely clever write and win. Howard Paula Goldsmith July 3, 2022 at 11:56 AM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this Tomato Soup win. Glad you like my fun write. Loved doing it. Have a great/blessed weekend..........

Caren Krutsinger May 5, 2022 at 10:42 AM I love this soup group, and I know you do also Paula Paula Goldsmith May 6, 2022 at 9:04 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this tomato soup write. Yes, I do enjoy the "Soup" group. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend..........

Andrea Dietrich May 1, 2022 at 1:13 PM So clever and so fun. Love this. Paula Goldsmith May 4, 2022 at 8:38 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this clever/fun tomato soup write. I really enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day..........

Brian Sambourne April 30, 2022 at 9:57 PM Very clever, Paula! I especially enjoyed the twist at the end. Be well dear lady. Brian Paula Goldsmith May 4, 2022 at 8:37 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my clever tomato soup write. It was really fun to write. Have a great/blessed day..........

Harry Horsman April 29, 2022 at 6:12 AM Clever Paula, love the last line. Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2022 at 11:52 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you love the last line to my fun soup write. Have a great/blessed day..........

Swetha Vangaveti April 29, 2022 at 2:30 AM I wanna get my cup of soup now! Lol. Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2022 at 11:51 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. One cup of tomato soup coming up. Do you want crackers or bread & butter??? Have a great/blessed day..........

Darlene De Beaulieu April 28, 2022 at 3:14 PM Hello Paula, This is a good imagination creating this poem. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu April 30, 2022 at 10:51 AM Hello Paula, yes I do like this one. Thank you. You also have a great blessed day. Hug Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2022 at 11:49 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day..........