Tom Tit

beware of the triple curse, aflame, green fire burns out a name, on a tombstone sombre lit, beware of ol Tom Tit, a legendary name... half wit... insane... a bit... so lame ...... re Russell Siveys "Where Skeletons Lay" Don

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John Loving Iii

Date: 10/4/2012 8:09:00 AM

Take out the last line and you can call it a shape.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/2/2012 10:24:00 AM

wonderful story is this, Don,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/1/2012 11:09:00 PM

Don, always enjoying your way with poetry... now I will look up Russell's... goodnight..pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2012 4:38:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Winner for sure..Sara

David Williams

Date: 10/1/2012 1:21:00 PM

Don, long time since been on here, I like this tale of bones long since laid to rest..Dave

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/27/2012 5:32:00 PM

Wonderful, simply wonderful my friend, I really do love it! I love how you took my poem and created yours, so very fine and wondrous! You interpretation is fantastic, I really enjoyed your perfected poem, you did awesome! What a significant piece, Great Work!!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/27/2012 3:15:00 PM

Nice... Terry