Tom the Tatters Man

TOM THE TATTERS MAN






The sidewalk creaked the old-ship-creak, cracking away a gorge at last;
  asphalt split like wood, split-fast and bastions and toilets ------
  overflowing fast; flooding through the deep dark cracks:
  the Drunken Dance

Tom the Tatters Man, Tom and Ned ------- drowned whiskey white 
  wreaking around where harlequins astound; with wine and clowns 
  and nothing but buzzards around ------ they shot them all down,
  they drank while death danced in their hands, heaving and hawing
  til their heads swam
 
Alleys here and there strewn with vagabond boxes, boxed like shoes 
  too tight to make the fit ------ they'd all given up on the fix of life
  every last one; the eldest and the young,
  beggars all

Skyscraper shadows make a house of steely-steel thatched roofs
  steely rust upon the alleyway proofs, the back is cold and stiff upon
  morning whiffs.... 
  of molten garbage

Defeat

Tom the Tatters Man did not despair, while here and there
  molten garbage everywhere ------ in his socks and shoes, 
  molten in his mouth despite a tune, as he rose up and flinched
  his morning love; a shot of whiskey at nine o'clock
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 12:51 PM
really very beautifully penned piece excellent pen
Chircop Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Hi keith,at last you are writing again.I was so missing your poetry.Outstanding post!!Charma
O.J. Hunt Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Hi Charma, been away for awhile, trying to make a comeback soon..... didn't have much time for poetry or the Soup this summer. Glad you enjoyed! Always, Keith
Onclaud Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 12:49 PM
great work with deep insights.. wonderfully written, keith.. huggs
O.J. Hunt Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 12:39 PM
Many thanks nette, hopefully soon I'll be back on the Soup, glad you enjoyed!:-)
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