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Tokyo Metro

TOKYO METRO

the eerie silence
packed in with no elbow room —
assignment Japan
           the American’s  mischief
erupts in stifled laughter

12/12/2018

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2018

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December 14, 2018 at 4:46 AM

Every city and country have their problems...you've painted a very vivid picture with words.

December 14, 2018 at 5:14 PM

For sure!

Caren Krutsinger

December 13, 2018 at 1:44 AM

Aha, loving the image portrayed here, as I can definitely see myself in one of these roles.

December 13, 2018 at 7:31 AM

LOL!

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