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29.08.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Together We Are One -

                                              _____________________
                                             /                                    / I
                                           /                                     /  I
                                         /                                     /    I
                                        /                                    /      I
                                       /___________________ /        I
                                       I   My heart is complete  I         I
                                       I    loving who you are    I        I
                                       I    We have each other   I     /  
                                       I     - that's all I need      I   /
                                       I____________________/
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Scott Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 12:12 AM
Very clever 'inside the box' poem! :) What an innovative idea
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Simple and elegant.
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Ahhh!!! Good one. So many couples are so suited for each other and seem to enjoy each other's company. Sad that it can't be that way with all couples. Thanks for sharing this one with us with its design as well. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
DiMino Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 6:25 AM
We begin with love (God's) -- and we come full circle when share. Lovely write!
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 8:35 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Joe :) - hugs
M  Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 4:42 PM
Hi Sunshine…Simple and straight to the point…..lovely poem! Debx
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:12 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Deb :) - hugs
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 2:41 PM
Love the imagery Anne-Lise, and a poem to match, thinking outside the box again, ain’t it great, all the best for contest, cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 12:08 AM
I was alluding to the writing on the outside the box lol!
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 4:19 PM
- David, "Moose Hunting" ... my poem from yesterday ... is an "outside the box" poem ... this is "inside the box" :))) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 11:48 AM
The imagery is awe-inspiring, evoking a sense of beauty and romance. Anne-Lise, your message resonates like a haunting melody, gracefully crafted and exquisitely expressed. Magnificent work.
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:18 PM
- The search for true love can feel endless, Las - But once you find it, you know it in your heart :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 11:31 AM
A beautiful, haunting message, Anne-Lise. So nicely done. :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:14 PM
- Simple but genuine, Evelyn :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 11:24 AM
aww so romantic Anne- Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:13 PM
- Happy that you think so ... many thanks for the lovely comment, Jan :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Nice words to describe so much of relationship.
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:04 PM
- One word is enough; Love - Many thanks for the nice comment, Jay :) - hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Hello Sunshine Smie, It is so romantic. Hugs. /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 4:26 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, Your welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene\
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:05 PM
- Hello Darlene :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 10:46 AM
So few words that say SO much! Lovely poem, Anne-Lise! Janice
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:02 PM
- Sometimes we don't need many words to describe love, Janice - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 9:57 AM
WOW!!! A wonderful write with few words/picture/shape. "Love It" "Good Luck" Have a blessed day................
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 10:14 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Paula :) - hugs
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