- Together We Are One -

                                              _____________________
                                             /                                    / I
                                           /                                     /  I
                                         /                                     /    I
                                        /                                    /      I
                                       /___________________ /        I
                                       I   My heart is complete  I         I
                                       I    loving who you are    I        I
                                       I    We have each other   I     /  
                                       I     - that's all I need      I   /
                                       I____________________/

blessingtrue loveverse

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Sam Scott

Date: 9/15/2023 12:12:00 AM

Very clever 'inside the box' poem! :) What an innovative idea

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/30/2023 10:58:00 AM

Simple and elegant.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2023 9:13:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Good one. So many couples are so suited for each other and seem to enjoy each other's company. Sad that it can't be that way with all couples. Thanks for sharing this one with us with its design as well. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/30/2023 6:25:00 AM

We begin with love (God's) -- and we come full circle when share. Lovely write!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2023 8:35:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Joe :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 8/29/2023 4:42:00 PM

Hi Sunshine…Simple and straight to the point…..lovely poem! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2023 1:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Deb :) - hugs

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/29/2023 2:41:00 PM

Love the imagery Anne-Lise, and a poem to match, thinking outside the box again, ain’t it great, all the best for contest, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/30/2023 12:08:00 AM

I was alluding to the writing on the outside the box lol!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 4:19:00 PM

- David, "Moose Hunting" ... my poem from yesterday ... is an "outside the box" poem ... this is "inside the box" :))) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/29/2023 11:48:00 AM

The imagery is awe-inspiring, evoking a sense of beauty and romance. Anne-Lise, your message resonates like a haunting melody, gracefully crafted and exquisitely expressed. Magnificent work.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 12:18:00 PM

- The search for true love can feel endless, Las - But once you find it, you know it in your heart :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs