Together Forever

Through all My pain and all My years,

I still feel blessed that most My tears,

Were from a love I will never ever forget.

If I had just one more day,

I think I would have to walk away,

Cause My life is still an empty page.

Now if I lived a better life

You'd be in My arms and I'd finally write

Myself a book about my tragedies

How it all just turned around

I lost faith and hit the ground

Next thing I knew hit the lottery

I'v made mistakes I don't regret

The whiskey does help me forget,

My many soul mates that have come and gone.

But it's okay cause I still got my dog

My big blue truck 

And my best friend rob.

To be my side in my time of need.

I soon came to understand,

Life is a game of who, what, where, and why.

She's the Queen of Diamonds.

I'm not even In the deck

I'm the Joker you take out

Before you place a bet.

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Date: 3/22/2016 10:28:00 PM
Hani. I'm sorry that I did not notice my mail earlier. Beloved, if life were a game, you would certainly be in the deck; and whomever pulled you would be a winner, just like you. I like your poem. I felt it deeply. God bless you my friend. Curtis.
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:44:00 AM
Hani, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA
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Date: 2/1/2016 8:26:00 PM
Hi Hani, You penned such raw emotions in this piece. It has nice flow with good content. You have caputured the feeling of love and loss very well.Life is what we make of it no matter what cards are dealt. - Alexis PS. when you have a chance stop by and view my page.
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Date: 2/1/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, I appreciate the time you took to comment, I will view your poems this week and let you know what I think, happy days to your my friend.
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