Together By the Stove

Pinhead sized raindrops fall in numbers, attempting to imitate fog

Green needled giants with red bark stand at attention and point at the sky

The odd deciduous turns yellow as though in fear of the impending cold

They are dwarfed by valley walls which are sealed above by oppressive clouds

Mighty Columbia drops an ice cold tongue, coloured from the cleanest blue to the dirtiest grey, to lick the valley floor

It drools crystal clear water and spits moraine

POP!

The wood makes the same sound being split by fire or by axe

We face each other on a bench by the stove

We alternate sides attempting to maintain a balance between the side feeling the heat of the stove and the other being chilled by the mountain breeze

Our hot side like the heat of summer and our cold side like the chill of winter

The seasons change in us as they do outside

Each season returning to itself in the course of time

White streaks through dark night-sky-hair to slowly become the meteor shower that awaits us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 28, 2015 at 9:11 PM
Peter, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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February 27, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Peter, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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February 27, 2015 at 9:13 AM
Hey Peter and Shahla, stopped by to visit and found this amazing tribute to your love and devotion to each other and expressed with such amazing imagery. Well done and beautifully written. Be Blessed, Neva
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February 26, 2015 at 11:36 PM
I really like the contrasting temps of the stove and breeze with the seasons...welcome to PS....a7 +++
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March 9, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Thanks Tim. We were nearing the end of our ten year world tour when we wrote this one.
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