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Together As One:

From the beginning to the end I will, Follow you all the way in every day, Completing each other to gain our fill, The price for your love I shall always pay. I get lost when I look deep in your eyes, Feeling lonesome without your love again, For I know one thing, that would not be wise, I would move mountains, I would fight all men. Just to be in your arms for one more night, Have never turned my back on you before, So hold me close honey, hold me so tight, Let me be your ocean and you my shore. There is only one more thing to admit, Together as one, next to you I sit. /|\ (Ten syllables per line)

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Date: 11/1/2016 7:23:00 AM
I w/Alexis on that big 7 thing, Budge. It is a gorgeously penned Sonnet. I have a ways to go to get to that Sonnet level you're now at. Your hard work is paying off greatly. Love from the ghetto brother. RW
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Date: 11/1/2016 5:32:00 PM
Yes, I find the sonnet most intriguing RW. I use the syllable counter above to make sure I'm right. Haha. Look forward to your first attempt and I'm sure it would be a beaut! Your mate, Budge. /|\
Date: 10/28/2016 5:47:00 PM
Hi Rick, This is such a beautiful Sonnet. It is so romantic. You penned of love that everyone wants to experience one day. I enjoyed the read. A big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/28/2016 5:53:00 PM
Wow, not just a 7 but a big SEVEN! Haha, Thanks, Alexis /|\
Date: 10/28/2016 2:47:00 PM
the flame of love becomes you, rick.. a most superb write.. spill ink!..huggs
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Date: 10/28/2016 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, 'the flame of love' I like that! /|\
Date: 10/28/2016 9:05:00 AM
Now this is love, this is a love poem. Very nicely done Rick. This when touched me this morning as I read reminding me of many things I wish I would have said, but didn't.
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Date: 10/28/2016 5:43:00 PM
Thanks, Chris, means a lot to me coming from a poet of your caliber. /|\
Date: 10/28/2016 5:10:00 AM
Beautiful indeed ... lyrical too ... Victor is absolutely right ...
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Date: 10/28/2016 5:17:00 AM
Thank you, Probir, I maybe a bachelor but I can dream, Ha /|\
Date: 10/28/2016 4:44:00 AM
'Let me be your ocean and you the shore' that alone is a 7+!
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Date: 10/28/2016 5:03:00 AM
I enjoy the sonnet form, even though I find it hard! Thanks Paloma /|\

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