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Together Apart Premiere Contest Winner

A hug when we meet That fills me with such pleasure. Softly lingering. Why are you feeling so good? Can't you see that I'm busy? A kiss in my dream Bringing me sweet thoughts of her. I wake up smiling. We never kiss anymore. You talk in your sleep a lot! The scent of perfume of the most expensive kind. Deep crimson lipstick. What in the world is that smell? And what's that on your collar? July 01 2017

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Date: 7/30/2017 8:59:00 PM
Nice job with this form PL. Congratulaitons on your win. - Dean
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Date: 7/29/2017 12:07:00 PM
Creative work..Congrats on your winner..Sara
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Date: 7/28/2017 7:11:00 PM
VERY nice!! I wasn't sure if I did mine right. But I am glad to see I did and YOU did AWESOME with the challenge!! Congratulations.
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Date: 7/29/2017 10:04:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Once I wrapped my head around it I found I quite enjoyed the format. Two voices, neither my own, was a nice challenge.
Date: 7/28/2017 7:00:00 PM
those little tell tale signs sure do give the game away :-( many congrats on your win PL:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thank You Jan. Sometimes two lives together are really two lives apart.
Date: 7/28/2017 4:10:00 PM
Great contrasts...love's sad end. Congrats!
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Date: 7/29/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim. Some things never end