Together

If I love you until time's end,
will you always remain my truest friend?



For "Succinct" contest sponsored by Brian Strand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Merryman Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 10:23 PM
This is so sweet. Congrats on your win, George. Kim
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 7:10 PM
Congratulations on your third place win with this amazing write! Lori
Song Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 3:56 PM
Yes,.......if your name is SANTA CLAUS!!! LOL. cONGRATS AGAIN! :)
Dufresne Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 5:27 AM
congratulations to you George on your win in Brian's contest.
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Succinct" contest George. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 2:40 AM
Congrats George on your win in Brian's contest.Nice write.
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 9:35 PM
gosh, I sure hope so, George (whoever you asked this to!) Congrats on your wonderful succinct couplet.
Song Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Congrats George....this is a humdinger of a question....
Johnson Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Great question and win. Congratulations. Joyce
Freeman Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Way to go George, nice to see your poem rate top three, Congratulations on your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
Neels Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:15 AM
George, I love this, wishing you all the best for Brian's contest with this gem ;)
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