Together

If I could paint love across the sky for everyone to see, Maybe, they wouldn't deny that it can spread as far as can be And when the rain falls, it will bring love upon everyone Healing hearts with refreshing cleansing, until the sun Returns with warmth and light to guide us through the day All beginning with a new rising, for us to find the way It is time to let love connect us all, from near and far And it is time for us to follow, every shining star Together beneath this canvas of sky that hangs above Together we can shine and together share this love Heidi Sands 5/4/20

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/3/2020 10:55:00 PM

Heidi, Breath of fresh air and welcome relief. The winds have blown ominous for so long this Spring. Still devoted to all the strokes you've shared. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2020 7:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Richard. I hope all is well for you. Have a nice day :)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/3/2020 9:12:00 PM

I was sure I commented on this one, oh well, better late than never, or better never late as they say. Back to you Heidi a lovely write that merits a second read. Thanks for posting!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thank you John. I appreciate your comment and support. I hope all is well. Take care :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/29/2020 9:29:00 AM

So true, Heidi, together we can share this love:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/29/2020 9:34:00 AM

Thank you Jo. :)

Estela Canama

Date: 5/27/2020 10:00:00 PM

Such a great feeling of being loved. Keep the love blooming inside your hearts.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/28/2020 6:48:00 AM

Thank you Estela. I appreciate your comment :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/26/2020 8:15:00 AM

Hello Heidi, a beautiful poem about feeling love and loved. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/26/2020 5:46:00 PM

Hello Heidi, yes all is well. Enjoy your evening my friend.Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/26/2020 9:56:00 AM

Thank you Darlene. I hope all is well. Have a nice day :)

John Watt

Date: 5/19/2020 11:56:00 AM

"If I could paint love across the sky". What an endearing sentiment beautifully expressed in this poem of hope and goodwill. Thank you for spreading the love, Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/19/2020 6:28:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comment John and you are welcome. I hope all is well :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 5/12/2020 2:07:00 AM

ohhhh Heidi, such beautiful sentiments expressed in your very own unique and special way. You truly have the sweetest soul my friend and thank you for lifting my spirit on this sunny morn. Sending love to you my friend ~ sending love to everyone... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/13/2020 8:24:00 AM

Hi Ann. Thank you so much for your kind comment. Love to you too. Enjoy today :)

Silent One

Date: 5/11/2020 8:44:00 AM

Sure, happy to collaborate to spread the love....

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/13/2020 8:23:00 AM

That is wonderful Silent One. I apologize for the delay with my reply. Some unexpected things came up. I will put more thought into this idea though and figure out if I can get something started. I hope you are well. Take care. Thank you ;)

Silent One

Date: 5/11/2020 6:56:00 AM

we should all paint love together and create a masterpiece, so the world can sing in harmony... hang on.. is that a song? Lol... Hope you are well my friend...

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/11/2020 7:46:00 AM

Lol. Actually maybe we should come together to write a nice collaboration to get through these difficult times? A thought! Thank you Silent One :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/10/2020 9:58:00 PM

Heidi, Just admiring this poem's brush strokes and the promise of your Summer rays. Thanks for rekindling the fires kept burning bright throughout these days. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/11/2020 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Richard. I appreciate your kind comment and support always. You are welcome :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/10/2020 12:17:00 PM

This awful virus has brought people together more than ever before as we are fighting a common enemy of course with the exception of President Trump who only has anger in his heart and fights with politicians and organisations worldwide! You should be made President Heidi Sands who can tell the world "together we can shine and together share this love - superb poem Heidi. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/10/2020 3:29:00 PM

I hope that we can try to work together. This is impacting all of us. Thank you for your visit and blessings Jennifer. Take care :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/9/2020 10:25:00 AM

Sweet thoughts Heidi, best wishes...

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/10/2020 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Charlie. I hope you have a nice day :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/9/2020 8:39:00 AM

Such a beautiful uplifting poem, Heidi! The virus tried robbing you of physical strength, but failed to deprive you of a faithful and loving muse! :) A fav for me :) Warm regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/10/2020 7:33:00 AM

Thank you Paul. I appreciate your kindness. I hope you have a nice day :)