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Toddler's Play

Toddler’s Play

There once was a home with two daughters.
Mother was sleeping.  Two adorned her!
Her lipstick took a trip.
Doorbell rang; Mom ran…zip!
Hysterical!  Lipstick-faced...caught her!

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
February 27, 2010
Poetic form:  Limerick

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Robert A. Dufresne

February 28, 2010 at 6:23 AM

haha -funny little imps! Cute. -Robert

Anna-Marie Docherty

February 28, 2010 at 5:30 AM

Smiles, you've a good sense of humor and imagination...Well done!

Audrey Haick

February 27, 2010 at 1:18 PM

This is certainly a very good Limerick, Dane Ann. Haven't completed mine... But you are so good!! In my mind I picture this whole scene! Great job! Thanks for taking your time to read so many of my poems, Dane Ann! I want to say that I truly appreciate all your kindness and friendship. You have a heart of gold! I bet you already know that, but I need to tell you that, from my heart! Peace and much love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

February 27, 2010 at 9:54 AM

Cute title and cute poem!!Thanks for your comment to my blog, Dane Ann. I want to do a limerick contest here, don't know about Crayola Monster , but something to do with colors, I know a challenge for that. Hopefully I can get around to a contest sometime. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

February 27, 2010 at 8:09 AM

Now this is one terrific limerick, Dane Ann!! I can just see the daughters being "creative" as they apply the lipstick. Very funny! Love you, Carolyn And I didn't know today was your birthday. Wish you had told me earlier! Hope it is a happy one!

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 27, 2010 at 7:26 AM

HAPPY BIRTHDAY my dear friend Dane Ann. I love your Limerick poem it made my day a little brighter thank you. Thank you for reading my poetry and for your kind comments. Love and blessings always, Carol

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