Toddler's Dream

He stumbles and trips,
walking through the dark forest.
His new shoes hurt his sore feet.
He continues on.
Brushing past a sodden branch,
the brittle limb snaps and breaks,
It pinches his hand.
Quickly he licks his finger.
The stiff sap is thick and sweet.
He finds it tasty.
Reaching out he snaps another,
it tastes like a candy cane.
He is the hunter
searching behind heavy eyes,
head upon his soft pillow,
sleepy little one
filled with dreamy illusions
of floating marshmallow clouds
raining sweet nectar 
on golden lollipop trees.
Atop rolling gum drop hills,
seen through filmy eyes,
he rides a cherry caboose 
on dark licorice whip rails.
Outside he can see
wispy strands of sugar floss 
rise from butter cream rivers,
as Swedish fish jump
over rock candy boulders
of brightly colored sugar.
Now he runs laughing
in striped candy cane forests
where gooey gummy bears play.
He eats all of them,
waking with a tummy ache
from his drowsy fantasy.


8/26/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 12:49 AM
I like how you went from him walking in a normal rainy forest to licking his fingers and realizing it's all about the candy!! IN my estimation this was an excellent entry. Did it not win?? I see no congrats and gosh, It is sure better than mine was!
Muideen Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Wow!!!! What a lovely penned, your write flows eloquent in the heart of the readers.. Excellence........A.M.
La France Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Ian, a sweet write for the contest
Deremer Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Very nice!!! I really enjoyed it!!!
Inman Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Thanks Pam, a fun write.
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