Toddler Tweet

Toddler tweet

Merry blue dressed Bob, the builder,
Please return my reddish toy rooster,
I’ll give you my toy elephant,
A bubbly grey buoyant infant,
He is a long nosy mister.
                      
Rizwana bhurani.
21-10-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 5:32 PM
that's really cute, a long noisy mister!!
Bhurani Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:37 AM
i meant cute poet....(keypad gets tricky sometimes)
Bhurani Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:36 AM
well there....a cute comment from a cute poem...thank you
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 10:38 AM
made me smile Rizwana:-) hugs jan xx
Bhurani Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Thnx with a smile
A  Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Rizwana, LOL, LOL-- A long nosy mister, funny limerick. SKAT
Bhurani Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 2:29 AM
Thnx for your comments.New comers need boost from seniors.YOU are a wonderful poet.
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