Today's Syllabus (For Anwar Amilcar)

Look, boy, I will not say I am not proud of you
You building foundations for my pyramid so soon
I pray for you blessings in times of sun and moon
I pray your table banquets of joy may feast you
And that the mother of my grandchildren will be
Clothed with honor from your lips, and comforts
From your hands. A woman and wife deserves glory
For bringing our being and future into present courts
Of existential history. Shelter her with your heart
And be slow to anger never when her moods depart
The callous ways of the masculine will to do. Yet
Now, let me write you another truth of love, my son
I did not expect you to come to fatherhood and fret
Of for all the building work of self undone. Life's ton
Needs muscles of character, braced by a bright mind
To carry things to happy conclusion that needs seek.
You will search the years ahead, but will never find
The past of opportunities that fashion gifts. A meek
Man learns before experience teaches him the things
That make the old sing Psalms and pray for wings.

True education is the legacy of the past that we use
As keys for tomorrow's doors, without it, child we may
Travel in circles, and the journey takes us in a noose
Of fumbling frustrations ... and then to slow, slow decay.
What skills have life taught your hands, what will you
Teach your children ... a stone is only solid sand, which
Will you build upon? Will you see her eyes like a dew
Sparkling with pride when she looks at you? Yes, a rich
Purse is necessary, but riches is a treasure we earn
From the reward of service. O, my son, look and learn
For kindness of the heart, and passion of the hands are
More than diamonds hidden in the distant dream of stars.
Today's syllabus is my love ... and love hides its scar
In praise, dwell with your woman in peace, regret is war,
And you who war with your soul shall drink bitterness
From soggy tears; my son, love seeks the other's happiness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/30/2009 12:26:00 PM
Such a sage man, I have missed your wisdom. A shame to deny goodness when the package it comes in is not familiar ;) Light & Love
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Date: 6/21/2009 5:50:00 PM
Philosophy at its finest,..poetically correct !! awesome write L'nass
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:55:00 PM
And yet, one must stand upon what they believe; or they may as well be building their foundation upon the shifting sands!? The Holy Spirit is like the wind Christ once said; it comes and goes; and sometimes it storms!? No lifes cup has been filled beyond measure such as Christ's was while here; not yet!!!~Smile, "I Love You, And This Beautiful Write L'nass, Forever!!!":):) Goodnight My Dear Gifted & Beautiful Brother ~
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:49:00 PM
And another dressed in fine purple linen, whom went to hades; and actually, no one in the Bible spoke more of hells existence then Christ Himself did!! So again, this faith of my own, was what encompassed my earlier comment unto "Your Beautiful Self!!!":):)~And I do believe in Heavens mercy, upon countless millions upon millions of living souls whom never had a chance!!? Hence, the story of Lazurus and beyond I would believe; at least, within my own belief....Cont....
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:41:00 PM
And I am a firm believer, that ones own heart shall be of a great importance to perhaps their eternity someday!!?:):)~And when I speak of "Your Ancestry, I speak of them within the utmost admiration; for they were and still are, a great culture and a great people!!!:):)~In the Book of Luke, which I believe in; in the 16th chapter, Christ speaks about a man named Lazurus whom went to Abrahams bossom....Cont....
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:33:00 PM
Smile~L'nass, my other father, my brother, my friend!!!:):)~Smile, I loved "Your" comment Brother!! And yes, I am aware of existentialisms and ambiguities within regards to humanity and their beliefs; or even non-beliefs!!? My comment unto "Yourself" earlier was strictly spoken from my own perspective Dear Brother, and not to be placed upon anyone elses concious!!? Just as many of my writings are; spoken from my own heart and souls concious!!!:):)....Cont....
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:17:00 PM
L'nass, the view from the cat-bird seat is "noble and wise" fine write!! Jim
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Date: 6/15/2009 10:11:00 AM
Smile~I always see "The Light" shining so brightly within "You," and it so very apparently clear, that "Heavens Hands" are upon "You & Your Writings," which in turn, brings my soul great joy for "You" and those whom shall be blessed through "Your Annointed Words!!!":):)~"Beautiful Write"~And, "My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Eternally, John!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day L'nass!!!":):) Bye ~
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Date: 6/15/2009 10:04:00 AM
Is my love temporal? Or is it eternal? And then I ponder this truth--I have know way of knowing upon an absolute, who's names are written within "The Book of Life?!"~Thus I find it hard to perhaps play russian roulette sometimes, in the name of love....Better safe than sorry I say!? And within the end, the conclusion unto it all always returns to the very same answer for myself--How deep is my love, truly!!?....Cont....
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:56:00 AM
"This Is Very Beautiful L'nass, Just Like 'Your Priceless Heart & Soul' I Believe!!!":):)~Again, I see "Your Ancestry" within this wonderful write within part~The exaltation of the woman within their eyes....And yes, "The Syllabus"~A lecture upon the main points of a courses contents; and is this case, "Love!!!":):)~Smile, and when I consider love, I always ask myself this question?....Cont....
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:25:00 AM
Incredible writing my friend..the title and the lesson in the piece speak loudly...hope the son is taking heed...
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:13:00 AM
i just want to drop a comment bro, i will be going back to school tomorrow, i will be starting my exams soon... i do not have much to say bro than to say that you are the bomb...yeah
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