Today's Forecast - Real Feel

It's fifty one degrees outside,
but it feels like forty five.
Rain is drip drop drizzling
and it drenches like a dive.

A cold wind chill is coming in,
perhaps that's why it feels this way,
or maybe because I'm splashing in puddles
and you and the sun don't want to play.

1/24/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/25/2020 7:01:00 PM
the last stanza give it a lonely touch but i love the way you crafted this one Juliet... wonderful penning :) hugs
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/25/2020 7:18:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. It does seem to convey that. I wrote this on a whim with laughter, as my husband and I joke about the weatherman stepping outside and saying, "It feels like..." You know what I'm talking about with the real feel temperature? We base this upon someone's feelings.
Date: 1/24/2020 11:17:00 AM
Kind of sad but very cute. Love how you did this and the ending, though a bit lonely, made me smile
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/24/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Chris. I looked at today's forecast and this is what it said, "51 degrees, feels like 45," so I pondered of the discrepancy and wrote down a little jot. It was all in good fun.
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