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Today I Learn To Be a Widow, Lesson 6

lesson six


some days i’ll be up ready to go
and i’ll have a productive day
sometimes it won’t be so
i shouldn’t be hard on myself
go with the flow
life’s a roller coaster
it’s natural to feel low
and to be expected

when i look around my studio
sometimes i’ll have it all together
and agree to put on a show
other times i may feel
like i’m overcome with woe
i’ll have to ride it out
life’s one big rodeo
roll with the punches
go with the flow
always remember to
follow your rainbow



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~TODAY I LEARN TO BE A WIDOW~ 2020

AP: 2nd place 2021

Submitted on January 12, 2021 for contest BEST N-A POEM OF 2020 sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 4TH
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Summers Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 9:30 PM
I've finished reading parts 1 thru 6 and it is such a poignant reminder of the reality of life. I couldn't help but think of my mother knowing the she had to learn these lessons as well. Thank you for sharing. John
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January 19, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Absolutely, John. As I was living this, I too was thinking of my mother who had been through so much with my dad, lived through his decline, then poof one day gone out of her life. Thank you for reading 1-6. Most appreciated ~
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January 16, 2021 at 6:33 PM
This is a most vulnerable and authentic work in what must be a very difficult time for you. Yet you bravely open up and share yourself at this most consequential time for you. My heart goes out to you. You have always been so kindhearted to me. Time now for myself and others to send loving-kindness to you. You have many here and at AP who care for you both as a poet and a fine person. Be well dear poetess.
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January 17, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Dear Greg, thanks for your lovely visit and most heartwarming comment. Most appreciated ~
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:40 PM
so glad you got on the winners list Line, many congrats. good for you for publishing a mini book i am sure it will help many especially in the early days dealing with their loss. hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated ~
Hamilton Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Thanks Line congrats on your placement!
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Thank you so much, John. Most appreciated ~
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January 5, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Thanks for sharing your journey thru this hard time in your life. Wishing you a blessed new year. love phyl
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Phyllis. Happy New Year to you and yours ~
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January 4, 2021 at 3:11 PM
I hope this does well in the contest for you. Sorry I have not visited your poems lately . Just trying to keep caught up here and Xmas time was hectic. I think of you and hope you are doing ok. This kind of writing is cathartic. Keep it up, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 4:42 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea. I have been off wifi for the last two weeks, just getting back to reality~ Happy New Year, very best wishes to you and yours.
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December 30, 2020 at 1:46 AM
Your words here have a sublime directness and honesty with inspiring acceptance. Blessings to you, Line. May the new year bring you happiness.
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January 7, 2021 at 4:43 AM
Thank you so much, Geoffrey. Most appreciated. Happy New Year to your and your loved ones ~
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December 29, 2020 at 3:43 PM
Yes! my poetic friend, live is a journey of roses and thorns. ups and downs. I believe we have to have the lows to appreciates the highs. Wishing you the best year ever in 2021. ~ Elaine
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January 7, 2021 at 4:43 AM
Thanks for your lovely message, Elaine. Very best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2021 ~
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December 21, 2020 at 12:19 PM
Your poem is beautifully written, Line. I hope you are holding up under all this stress. I'm sorry for your loss and hope Christmas isn't too hard. My brother's wife died Saturday of cancer. And many people have lost loved ones to Covid. My sympathies and prayers are with you, Line. Love, Carolyn
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 4:46 AM
Thank you so much, Carolyn. I will definitely look up this book. I appreciate this suggestion. Happy New Year to you and your loved ones ~
Devonshire Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 12:45 PM
There is a book that helps. "How to Survive the Loss of a Love" helped me when my mother died. Maybe it would help you too. It's written by two doctors and a poet.
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December 21, 2020 at 9:44 AM
Nice rhyming nice Flow and sad but true. Hope all is well
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January 7, 2021 at 4:47 AM
Thank you very much, Linda. Best wishes to you and yours in 2021.
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Positively perfectly penned, Line! So joyous and realistic at once. You are an inspiration, my friend! Right into my FAVES! Thanks, Gershon
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December 17, 2020 at 5:50 AM
Thank you for the pat on the back, Gershon. Most appreciated ~
Seeker Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 6:32 PM
Beautiful reflections! To see the rainbow, open the window :)
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December 17, 2020 at 5:50 AM
Thanks ~ fresh air does indeed have healing powers. Thank you for your visit and comment.
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