Afolabi Muideen Poet I do not know?

Today I Fall

Today I fall


My heart fills with glee
Today I fall in love
I felt the need to sing
I felt the need to leapfrog
My 32 stay unclose
It as the white bulbs bright at night
My belly fills with love
I am unable to eat
Her picture within my eye
I felt like seeing her in my front
I lie on bed to sleep
But her thought didn't let me sleep
I close my eye for a long time, but thoughts are
Flowing as water
How am I going to confront her?
What should I say to her?
Should I start with HELLO or HI
An innocent heart in love.



I penned this to draw your mind to the beginning, how do you feel then? Share me yours

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Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:25 AM Lovely and sweet, my dear. If I were you, I would read this to her...It's sure to capture her heart. Hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 23, 2015 at 11:03 PM Afolabi, I know these as I am feeling this!!mmmmmn lovely happy feeling!! short solide lines flowing wow!~Olive Eloisa =')

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2015 at 10:19 PM Yes, it feels JUST like that. Well described, my friend!

Justin Bordner July 23, 2015 at 8:30 PM Your description of Love's invasion of the body and soul is truly innocent and life changing Afolabi...tell her that you love her, make it a priority...J.A.B.

Sara Kendrick July 23, 2015 at 1:04 PM Hello or Hi would be a start..She could be the one but you'll never know if you don't say the first greeting..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Alexis Y. July 23, 2015 at 2:58 AM Afolabie, when you're falling in love its pure bliss. That person is all you think of all day long. You just can't wait to be in their presence. You have penned a well written piece. Your thoughts were well expressed.Great job:-)Alexis

Ravi Sathasivam July 23, 2015 at 1:43 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Constance La France July 22, 2015 at 5:25 PM FM, there is nothing more magical than budding love, it is everything, all consuming, I love the idea of falling in love, magical 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, I breathed . . .

Tim Smith July 22, 2015 at 4:34 PM Hi always seems more intimate to me...a new love gives you more energy and a spring in your step...a purpose for your life...It doesn't get any better