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Today I Fall

Today I fall My heart fills with glee Today I fall in love I felt the need to sing I felt the need to leapfrog My 32 stay unclose It as the white bulbs bright at night My belly fills with love I am unable to eat Her picture within my eye I felt like seeing her in my front I lie on bed to sleep But her thought didn't let me sleep I close my eye for a long time, but thoughts are Flowing as water How am I going to confront her? What should I say to her? Should I start with HELLO or HI An innocent heart in love. I penned this to draw your mind to the beginning, how do you feel then? Share me yours

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/24/2015 12:25:00 AM

Lovely and sweet, my dear. If I were you, I would read this to her...It's sure to capture her heart. Hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/23/2015 11:03:00 PM

Afolabi, I know these as I am feeling this!!mmmmmn lovely happy feeling!! short solide lines flowing wow!~Olive Eloisa =')

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2015 10:19:00 PM

Yes, it feels JUST like that. Well described, my friend!

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/23/2015 8:30:00 PM

Your description of Love's invasion of the body and soul is truly innocent and life changing Afolabi...tell her that you love her, make it a priority...J.A.B.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2015 1:04:00 PM

Hello or Hi would be a start..She could be the one but you'll never know if you don't say the first greeting..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/23/2015 2:58:00 AM

Afolabie, when you're falling in love its pure bliss. That person is all you think of all day long. You just can't wait to be in their presence. You have penned a well written piece. Your thoughts were well expressed.Great job:-)Alexis

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/23/2015 1:43:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Constance La France

Date: 7/22/2015 5:25:00 PM

FM, there is nothing more magical than budding love, it is everything, all consuming, I love the idea of falling in love, magical 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, I breathed . . .

Tim Smith

Date: 7/22/2015 4:34:00 PM

Hi always seems more intimate to me...a new love gives you more energy and a spring in your step...a purpose for your life...It doesn't get any better