Today

Sometimes it seems I'm living in
Mistakes of years gone by
I get a panoramic view
Of things I never tried

For each dumb thing, I've done it twice
And I am twice the fool
I've taken half the good advise
And followed half the rules

But everybody has the past
Still gleaming in their eyes
And everyone would try again
If they could press rewind

Somehow we only bit our tongues
When all the words were spoken
Somehow it hurts to trace a scar
More then a wound that's open

As moments come, and decades go
Sometimes we see just half
While half of every waking thought
Is buried in the past

Among the ashes of the clock
We're charred until we say
It isn't what I've done that counts
It's what I'll do today

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/18/2011 7:47:00 PM
honestly. this almost brought tears to my eyes because it struck something in me that I could relate to more than anyone could know. Thanks for writing this... you have amazing talent. -Amber
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:31:00 PM
Just lovely, well put together with a lot of thought
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:42:00 PM
I'm gonna welcome you to the soup Kyle, i see you are new.. and a well poet indeed.. as for today... i try very hard to suppress my past... its not worth it,, and rewind time.. boy who would not want to... and i like your ending.. yes.. its what i will do today that counts... you take care and thanks for reading my poetry.. I have a new one.. caller ~please~ check it out...lol.. don't be afraid of long poems..lol.... that's a joke... always,..Linda
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