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Tobacco Match-Questionku With Tobacco Bridge- Haiku

Tobacco Match – Questionku with Tobacco Bridge - Haiku Tobacco Match - Questionku Children Playing Cigarettes and death What bum gave the matches Tobacco Bridge- Haiku young ones cover smoke under bridge, hid with matches lungs cannot forgive

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2015 5:00:00 AM

- So true - well written,Earl ! - Have a lovely day :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker
Date: 1/21/2015 6:16:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise, Thank you for commenting. I am never unkind with people and never use raw or undignified language against people but I had to make a poetic point by using the word "bum" to describe people who harm children or the young ones. I'm glad you enjoyed my 2 poems. Have a pleasant day. Take care. Earl