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Willy Whipple was a bread baker
Whose wife thought him a faker.
She called his bread awful
Comparing it to offal.
So Willy did up and forsaker.

humorlimerick

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Lindsay Laurie

September 30, 2015 at 10:56 PM

So got a visit from an undertaker - would be just as appropriate Paul. Thanks again - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter

January 9, 2016 at 9:46 PM

Sorry for the l-o-n-g delay in responding, Lindsay. Thank you for stopping by. I do appreciate it. I also appreciate your wonderful story poems.

Kp Nunez

September 24, 2015 at 10:45 PM

No, keep it. It's perfectly fine. This type is the bonehead limerick, a style favored by Edward Lear, right? Kind of nonsense but when you think about it, has more sense that what one initially credits it with. I myself am partial to limerick form, if you have noticed. hugs!