Toast

Willy Whipple was a bread baker
Whose wife thought him a faker.
She called his bread awful
Comparing it to offal.
So Willy did up and forsaker.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/30/2015 10:56:00 PM

So got a visit from an undertaker - would be just as appropriate Paul. Thanks again - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/9/2016 9:46:00 PM

Sorry for the l-o-n-g delay in responding, Lindsay. Thank you for stopping by. I do appreciate it. I also appreciate your wonderful story poems.

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/24/2015 10:45:00 PM

No, keep it. It's perfectly fine. This type is the bonehead limerick, a style favored by Edward Lear, right? Kind of nonsense but when you think about it, has more sense that what one initially credits it with. I myself am partial to limerick form, if you have noticed. hugs!

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/24/2015 12:29:00 AM

oh! Bad wife...and sensitive husband...better part ways...:-)

Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/24/2015 10:19:00 PM

It's kind of you to comment, Kim. Thank you. As limericks go, maybe this one should be gone. hugs xxx